a poem i wrote in the 8th grade |
  |
 Sep 20 2004, 04:55 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
Wow, This was 4 years ago. A lot of my poetry then was 'let my emotions write', So the finished product would usually look like this.
--- A Thought With A Million Thoughts The shot of pain bursts energy out of my heart. The world I left to return... The moment that frustrates my emotions, The rage that is masked by the depression, The nemesis that is me, The sorrow that is my soul. The confusion, my gasoline, To run my car of hell. The silence that deafens me, The immaturity of maturity. The lonliness of the corner of my mind that I sit in and cry, Cry tears of flame that burns my existence of disturbance. The screams from a distance are my own. The seed of my love is hate, and it is planted into my soul, which is parched for attention. A shock of reality hits me and I fall to death... Where I belong... I have no moon nor sun in my mind. The power of impurity, The innocence of a demon. Th raging angel has struck me with skillful persistence. The seed has sprouted and shows a flower of emotions that sizzles my heart which lives in the dark, fiery underworld. The moments of the past f*ck up the future. The painful sorrow, The sorrowful pain, The piercing lonliness, The attention that I f*cking scream for, but reject when it is thrown at my face. The love I will never feel for, feel to. This life would be better off without me. Goodbye... |
|
|
|
|
Sep 20 2004, 07:17 PM
Post
#2
|
|
|
SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
as alwayz got a sexy poem =P
and ashley HAND OVER YOUR POEMS!!! BWAHHAAH |
|
|
|
|
Sep 20 2004, 09:22 PM
Post
#3
|
|
|
Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Thanks for the comments...If you like it, Maybe you should check out the other shtuff I've posted in this thread.
|
|
|
|
|
Sep 20 2004, 11:56 PM
Post
#4
|
|
|
cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
I think I can somewhat relate with that one line... i like it <3333
|
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2004, 12:03 AM
Post
#5
|
|
|
Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Which one? The one about attention?
|
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2004, 11:42 AM
Post
#6
|
|
|
cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Sep 20 2004, 11:03 PM) Which one? The one about attention? Yes, love. =] |
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2004, 08:08 PM
Post
#7
|
|
|
Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Thanks, I'm sure a lot of people do it.
|
|
|
|
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: