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my girlfriends poem..
aznguy711
post Sep 15 2004, 06:12 PM
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QUOTE
At The Quiet Contemplation

as I sit in quiet contemplation
my thoughts centered, clear and true
my heart is filled to overflowing
with loving thoughts of you.

you make my life so beautiful
all my labors seem worthwhile,
for no matter how tough things get
just the thought of you makes me smile.

you fill me up when i am empty,
like no one else has done;
pour warmth into my spirit,
like rays from summer sun

like rain upon the desert,
on a dry and barren land;
you cause my soul to blossom,
with touch from gentle hands

and like the breeze of springtime,
gently 'cross my body blows
igniting there a flame of fire
that sets my heart aglow

you've placed a seed within me
that has grown into a vine
of sheer unbridle passion
tendrils curled and intertwined

you fill me up when i am empty
like an overflowing cup
no one else has ever filled me so
yet my love you fill me up


my gf jus showed me that..she sed that she wrote it bak in february and i was her inspiration...even tho we werent together awwww lol
 
mony0407
post Sep 16 2004, 09:19 AM
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thats really cute!! happy.gif
 
Caitlin
post Sep 16 2004, 12:27 PM
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thats an amazing poem
shes a great writer <33 its so sweet
 
xxdaydreamer143
post Oct 3 2004, 02:35 AM
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awwww boy u betta appreciate her!! tongue.gif (im sure u do or else u wouldnt have posted that)...unlike some otha guys who just dont care mad.gif pinch.gif blink.gif stubborn.gif tongue.gif did u ever write a poem for her?
 
TheSilenceInDict...
post Oct 3 2004, 02:51 AM
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Will write poetry for sex!
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Hrm that was pretty well-thought out. Pretty good.
 
LadyXTor
post Oct 3 2004, 12:17 PM
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Want fries with that?
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Super sweet! happy.gif you lucky guy you! laugh.gif
 

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