Melancholy Grin, please read and comment.. |
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 Sep 15 2004, 06:03 AM
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 i like cake.  Group: Member Posts: 25 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,796  |
Melancholy Grin
As I linger in the hallway Stroking doorbells one by one, they come to find me. Yet they know I'm just a figure from disgrace, With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? Let the tears bleed to my pillow, As those words will numb and Tear apart to overcome the fear... Can we escape what we're left to conceal, With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? How I've wished to ever tell you... About the gloom and heartbreak piercing through my soul... ... or have you noticed, thought, or even kept in mind? you're the only one who's really died. As the smile on my face Shall recoil with no trace, It's my eyes that look up Will you realize the truth? With a melancholy grin.. Silent voices speak this sin. None but darkness clings to faith. Yet where in time have you seen me begin? With a melancholy grin.. |
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Sep 15 2004, 07:40 AM
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 i'm lala. girly girl. Group: Member Posts: 1,531 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,888 |
i like that...that's nice...what inspired you to write that?
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Sep 16 2004, 02:57 AM
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i like cake. Group: Member Posts: 25 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,796 |
it`s kind of a song i began a few weeks ago and finished today.. the thing was i couldn`t smile or be myself in front of people, and everything fell apart. it seemed like i was invisible to the world though i was clearly there, and everyone was too blind to see how much of a tragity life itself can become.... i guess it was inspired by all the heartbreak, lies, and betrayal.... yet possibly it was from the pressure of everyone wanting to see people happy, that i stared at them blankly with a pause when they asked "what`s wrong?".. i explained it`s not a frown at all that i wear.. but a grin
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Sep 18 2004, 11:53 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
this is a great poem i can totally relate to this
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Sep 19 2004, 12:10 AM
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 I <3 profanity Group: Member Posts: 2,910 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,774 |
You are a very talented writer.
I love it. |
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Sep 19 2004, 11:19 AM
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 the chick with rainbow hair Group: Member Posts: 19 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,484 |
Thats -really- beautiful.....and I think Im one of alot of people here who can relate..I love it
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