Secret Keeper, please read &leave comments |
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 Sep 12 2004, 08:50 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
I did it again today,
Even though I swore to you I wouldn't, My dear secret keeper... I took the blade, And slowly, Ever so slowly, Slid it across my wrist... It felt so good, As the tears rolled down my cheek, And my problems went away... It was then that I realized, Dear Secret Keeper, That I betrayed you... I'm sorry, Oh so sorry, And I felt so bad... I almost did it again, But wouldn't that be betraying you, Dear secret keeper?... Yes, of course of course, I feel so awful, Dear secret keeper... That I cannot tell you the truth, Not an ounce, Even though thats why you're here... Because if I tell you, You might not love me anymore, My dear secret keeper. Leave some comments please |
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Sep 12 2004, 09:46 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
that sounds so depressing.
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Sep 12 2004, 09:48 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
so depressing and dark... i love it!
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Sep 12 2004, 09:55 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
QUOTE(smthngcrprategrl34 @ Sep 12 2004, 9:48 PM) so depressing and dark... i love it! thank you |
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Sep 13 2004, 12:58 PM
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 eeny meeny miny mo Group: Member Posts: 60 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,008 |
it's very dark and yes it's not something everybody might like... but there is something comforting about your poem... if that makes any sense.
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Sep 13 2004, 08:08 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
QUOTE(KaRaoKe_sLut @ Sep 13 2004, 12:58 PM) it's very dark and yes it's not something everybody might like... but there is something comforting about your poem... if that makes any sense. Yeah, I understand what you mean.Thanks |
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Sep 14 2004, 09:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,799 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,450 |
oh boy oh boy I L O V E IT!! =]
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Sep 14 2004, 09:12 PM
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Oooo thats so cool. I like how its dark and secretive LoL but yeah, make another! LoL 10-10 from muah
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Sep 15 2004, 08:56 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
QUOTE(tyedyefroggy @ Sep 14 2004, 9:12 PM) Oooo thats so cool. I like how its dark and secretive LoL but yeah, make another! LoL 10-10 from muah I'll work on some more. |
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