behind her mask, a poem by me |
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 Sep 5 2004, 12:22 PM
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her tears hide
behind a mask. for her, being happy is such a hard task. what's behind her smile nobody will know. for she lets her pain hide she never lets it show. her friends think she's happy they think that she's fine. but what they dont know is that she's sad all the time. she cries and she cries but nobody's there. nobody's there to listen or care. she's decided that she wants it to end. her knife she holds high her life she surrends. |
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Sep 5 2004, 03:20 PM
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 The voices talk too much... -.-u Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
QUOTE(lidoxangie @ Sep 5 2004, 10:22 AM) her friends think she's happy they think that she's fine. but what they dont know is that she's sad all the time. Take out the 'but'. It sounds funny. |
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