my untitled poem, that will remain untitled.. -_- |
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 Sep 2 2004, 11:50 AM
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I’m drowning although I’m not in the water.
I’m falling although I’m not in the air. I’m crying although I’m not in pain. Drowning in my fears Falling in my dreams Crying in my sleep The water is clear The air is fresh. I am tainted. |
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Sep 2 2004, 12:23 PM
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oh man that was a realli good poem.....
kinda has this "riddle" feel to u noe wat im sayin? |
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Sep 3 2004, 01:47 PM
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yea i know what ur sayin^^ that poem is great!!!
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Sep 4 2004, 05:23 PM
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!shobe! Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912 |
thank you very much for showing your appreciation of my work. ^_^
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Sep 4 2004, 06:13 PM
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Ohie I love it. Very nice. Discribes how I'm feeling right now. =] Great work.
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Sep 4 2004, 07:22 PM
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 The voices talk too much... -.-u Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
Hooray for dark poetry.
^_^ I like it. |
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Sep 4 2004, 07:26 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
its depressing. =/. perfect for my mood right now.
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Sep 5 2004, 04:01 PM
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!shobe! Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912 |
i'm glad you guys like it. ^_^
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