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 Aug 24 2004, 07:12 PM
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 love sucks...big time jessir..  Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644  |
Walking through the forest of
My memories The forest filled with trees The trees baring my past and As I swoosh past the good times and bad And memories that I wish I never had And as im walking through my childhood And the teenage years go by I saw a pink basket lying near a tree Filled with my memories of you As i went searching one by one Picking out the ones that didnt hurt I suddenly remembered Why I kept them astray So I closed the basket and walked away. |
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Aug 24 2004, 07:14 PM
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 freedom Group: Member Posts: 844 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,358 |
Thats a very nice poem. Did you write it?
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Aug 25 2004, 12:24 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow... aww seem like a sad poem but it's good^^;; hmm hehe^^;; i like this last lines
As i went searching one by one Picking out the ones that didnt hurt I suddenly remembered Why I kept them astray So I closed the basket and walked away. i liked that part the best... ^^ |
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Aug 25 2004, 12:41 AM
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love sucks...big time jessir.. Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644 |
yeah I did...its up on poetry.com and in a book. If u wanna check you can search for my name Emily Veras hehe ..thanxs for the compliments.
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Aug 25 2004, 01:32 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Wow, that's awesome! <3 it
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Aug 27 2004, 09:45 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 875 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,841 |
aw thats a really nice poem
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