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 Aug 23 2004, 06:02 PM
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Member  Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,268  |
tell me wut you think of this poem thnx!
I knelt to pray but not for long, I had too much to do. I had to hurry and get to work for bills would soon be due. So I knelt and said a hurried prayer, And jumped up off my knees. My Christian duty was now done My soul could rest at ease. All day long I had no time To spread a word of cheer. No time to speak of Christ to friends, They'd laugh at me I'd fear. No time, no time, too much to do, That was my constant cry, No time to give to souls in need But at last the time, the time to die.
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Aug 23 2004, 06:03 PM
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 kristin Group: Member Posts: 5,705 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,985 |
thats really good!
 but you might wanna put this in writing section next time 
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Aug 23 2004, 06:03 PM
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 We are the cure. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,936 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,456 |
This should be in Interests
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Aug 23 2004, 06:04 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
It's nice!, but please post your next poems/stories in writing.
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Aug 23 2004, 06:04 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 693 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,017 |
its ok. there was some parts i didnt' get. good job, though
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Aug 23 2004, 06:08 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,268 |
It's nice!, but please post your next poems/stories in writing.
woops sry! 
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Aug 23 2004, 06:23 PM
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My name is Jason, not imafreakinazn D: Group: Member Posts: 2,008 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,432 |
hmm...interesting. it's pretty good.
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Aug 23 2004, 06:57 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 5,585 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,082 |
Yeah, there are some parts I don't get. Basically, it's like this. I don't like poetry. Analyzing it and argh. >.< Lol, but your poem is good. It's better than anything I can write.
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Aug 23 2004, 08:58 PM
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 who again? Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458 |
yes, this is the 5th time i have heard of this poem, can you say copy and paste?
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