Disturbed Innocence, Please read! |
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 Aug 11 2004, 10:23 PM
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 Aww! ^___^  Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645  |
So yeah, here's a poem I wrote while listening to the song "Meant To Live". I don't see the connection with my poem and the song. But somehow I came up with the poem while listening to the song. So here you go; please comment:
Disturbed Innocence, by Me Sometimes the world goes crazy Or is it just me? Falling into nothingness Just above the ground Losing control of whatever is around Hurt and fear I have to face Tears pouring without grace Watching reality, hoping it’s just an illusion Don’t ruin my childhood imaginations With these innocent eyes of mine Already had enough of the cruel reality Telling my mind that all those were just dreams Please, walk away, before you hear my screams |
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Aug 11 2004, 10:27 PM
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oooo I like it. Nice Job!
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Aug 11 2004, 11:05 PM
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QUOTE(tyedyefroggy @ Aug 11 2004, 10:27 PM) oooo I like it. Nice Job! THANKS! |
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Aug 12 2004, 02:56 PM
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thats a great poem. good job!
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Aug 12 2004, 04:44 PM
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 make me lala Group: Member Posts: 486 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,831 |
i like it ! good job !
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Aug 12 2004, 08:44 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Thanks you guys!!
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