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Ermm.. a poem.. =-]
inthemudhole
post Jul 30 2004, 06:16 PM
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Okay. I know this really sucks, but I had a major writer's block last night, and I haven't written poetry for a few months.. =-/ I wrote this last night at around 3 AM, so yeah. It probably sucks, but I just wanted to post it up here. =-]

"Changing" (might change the title)

Memories flood me,
And dreams escape me.
Everything that I've known,
Has become unreal.

Everythign around me is changing.
Becoming different.
Becoming unknown.
Why must it all change?

Consumed inside of me..
Everything moves..
But I stand still.
Frozen.

Everyone is changing,
Yet I stay the same.
Lost.
Misunderstood.

Left behind,
I stand here alone.
Waiting.
Waiting for the life I knew to return.

Come back to me,
For everything is changing.
Changing.
Everything but me.
 
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post Aug 2 2004, 11:17 PM
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great job... well written :) <33 Kirstie
 
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post Aug 4 2004, 03:03 PM
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Wow, that's really good.
I can kind of relate too.
 

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