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 Oct 29 2009, 11:18 PM
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 Feedback please Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Oct 30 2009, 12:19 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Fonts clash too much, and I'm not sure what the red splotches are for. You don't need them.
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Oct 30 2009, 12:25 PM
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 Live long and prosper. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,142 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,926 |
You picked the wrong picture for the album "crossroads"
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Oct 30 2009, 12:48 PM
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ya all the fonts clash to much.
and it is almost always a rule of them to never use just totally plain white. and the effect you were going for with text on the road doesnt work. concrete does not have any reflective properties. I like the image though. did you take it? |
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Oct 30 2009, 12:58 PM
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 ICE CREAM ♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 405 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,617 |
It's just that bottom text that I don't like -- you're using three different style for three different fonts: serif, sans-serif, and stylescript. You should only use two out of the three at most, in that order. If you're not sure what these terms mean look here
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Oct 30 2009, 02:43 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
I need ideas on what 2 do this is just a demo.
any suggestions other then that mirror effect since "concrete dont reflect" Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Oct 30 2009, 03:23 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
naw just fix the perspective and make the color an off white to off white gradient. then add like a concrete texture overlay.
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Oct 30 2009, 03:27 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
If you really want that reflection, make it look like it's raining and add puddles on the road and have the letters reflect off of that. That's a bit complicated though. I'd just stick with a shadow or something.
Make sure if you do a reflection/shadow, the perspective is correct. It looks stupid otherwise. Play with perspective and skew tools a bit. I wouldn't make the text wider than the width of the road, either, because then you have to worry about how the shadow is going to look falling off the edge of the road. Just saying, it seems a bit odd to me that there's a road (with no rails on the edge or sort of support) in the middle of water. |
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Oct 31 2009, 01:51 AM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
QUOTE(elletricity @ Oct 30 2009, 04:27 PM)  If you really want that reflection, make it look like it's raining and add puddles on the road and have the letters reflect off of that. That's a bit complicated though. I'd just stick with a shadow or something. Make sure if you do a reflection/shadow, the perspective is correct. It looks stupid otherwise. Play with perspective and skew tools a bit. I wouldn't make the text wider than the width of the road, either, because then you have to worry about how the shadow is going to look falling off the edge of the road. Just saying, it seems a bit odd to me that there's a road (with no rails on the edge or sort of support) in the middle of water. ya its a manip so thats why... i like the idea of rain though so any ideas on how maybe i could makei t rain and have the rain look like its hitting the letters on the main text  Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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