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 Oct 14 2009, 06:13 PM
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Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: Oct 2009 Member No: 749,137  |
As i posted in introduction, im just starting the design concept of my life
so here is the first one. here is my Halloween myspace layout. critique as you will thanks for looking :] |
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Oct 14 2009, 10:29 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
The idea is cute but I feel like there's too much text. Like it's "Happy Halloween" the nav, your bio, friends, etc in one small space. Also your ghosts are low in image quality. And as cute as Domo is, that's a bit random lol. You need to work on it, tbh :/ And I'd mos def change the font you used for "Happy Halloween."
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Oct 16 2009, 05:12 PM
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 ICE CREAM ♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 405 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,617 |
^ I agree. There's quite a bit going on here, but the general concept is great. Try to tone things down so that you're using only about 2 to 3 different fonts, and try and keep somewhere between the same amount of colors as well (especially since you're working with a set theme already). If you follow those rules, I think you'll see a dramatic improvement.
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