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 Aug 18 2009, 04:20 PM
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Design Im making for them . . .
 **Edit2**  **Edit3**  Let me know what you think, and leave feedback on what to fix Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 18 2009, 05:28 PM
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its not serious enough imo,
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Aug 18 2009, 05:48 PM
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I pretty much agree with all the responses here :/ The way the brushes are standing look weird too. Maybe it's because they don't have a shadow? No sé.
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Aug 18 2009, 05:50 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
^ It's a little weird how the film strip has a reflection but the brushes don't.
Also, I'm not loving your font choice for the red text. |
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Aug 18 2009, 08:12 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
any suggestions on how 2 fix the edges ? the render came like that, and i tried doing the whole contract 1 px, and select inverse and delete stuff but didn't work
any ideas ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 18 2009, 08:18 PM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
Feather the selection by 1px
Or Edit the rough edges out manually Or Use the pen tool to select the object then delete the background that way Or Use layer masks for a non-destructive method of taking out the background. Oh. And the thing that bugs me Is that paintbrushes don't stand like that on their own And I don't like the background And the font sucks And the red is a little weird |
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Aug 18 2009, 08:23 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
QUOTE(zachyRAWR @ Aug 18 2009, 09:18 PM)  Feather the selection by 1px Or Edit the rough edges out manually Or Use the pen tool to select the object then delete the background that way Or Use layer masks for a non-destructive method of taking out the background. Oh. And the thing that bugs me Is that paintbrushes don't stand like that on their own And I don't like the background And the font sucks And the red is a little weird um ok there supposed to be leaning on the film shyt . . . and whats wrong with the background ? and what type of font you suggest then ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 18 2009, 08:50 PM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 19 2009, 09:23 AM) um ok there supposed to be leaning on the film shyt . . . and whats wrong with the background ? and what type of font you suggest then ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal Have you ever tried standing a paintbrush up like that? && The background makes it look... I don't know. I just looks a bit awkward And I think maybe if you changed the color or blended the text a little bit, it would look alright. Maybe try an Arial Black? Or something more artsy if you're going for that |
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Aug 19 2009, 12:28 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
Edited with new version leave, feedback ...
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 19 2009, 02:45 PM
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Yeah you can try lowering down the "flossy" effect on the film strips,
i don't think the color scheme isn't the best choice, but try experimenting with color shades similar to the ones you are using right now. |
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Aug 19 2009, 03:36 PM
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Flash Guru Group: Official Designer Posts: 75 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 565,133 |
tbh i liked the first one more than the edited version
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Aug 19 2009, 03:45 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
another version up take a look
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 19 2009, 05:27 PM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
The bottom's good
But I absolutely hate the top of the background Plus your edges are still jagged |
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| *Shelby-Zu* |
Aug 19 2009, 05:30 PM
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^this
third is my fav, still needs work x |
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Aug 19 2009, 06:06 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
back 2 the drawing board
 EDIT- o and i feathered the edges by 4px and it still didn't get rid of the rough edges... any more suggestions ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 19 2009, 06:13 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
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Aug 19 2009, 06:17 PM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
QUOTE(zachyRAWR @ Aug 19 2009, 09:18 AM) Edit the rough edges out manually Or Use the pen tool to select the object then delete the background that way Or Use layer masks for a non-destructive method of taking out the background. |
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Aug 19 2009, 06:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
QUOTE(emberfly @ Aug 19 2009, 07:13 PM) lmao i hate you  Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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