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 Aug 11 2009, 11:42 AM
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 Was bored at work , and don't have internet . . So i used what ever images i had on my laptop . . . Leave Feedback Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 11 2009, 11:44 AM
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 AIDS at RAVES. Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
his head looks choppy and weird :[
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Aug 11 2009, 11:45 AM
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QUOTE(synatribe @ Aug 11 2009, 12:44 PM)  his head looks choppy and weird :[ lol that's his hair . . you suggest me smoothing it out myself ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 11 2009, 11:47 AM
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AIDS at RAVES. Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 11 2009, 11:45 AM) lol that's his hair . . you suggest me smoothing it out myself ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal I meant the head, look at the forehead and yes the hair looks a little choppy, smoothing it out would be the way to go 
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Aug 11 2009, 11:51 AM
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i like all the text up top.
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Aug 11 2009, 12:06 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Just doesnt really flow, and work.
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Aug 11 2009, 12:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
The background and text look great, but the guy just kinda looks stuck on there. The cutting doesn't look natural, and his shirt color doesn't go with the background color.
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Aug 11 2009, 12:10 PM
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 Nick Group: Member Posts: 78 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,993 |
it looks nice but.. the edges on him are too rough espcilly round his head
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Aug 11 2009, 01:01 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Blending of guy/background is a little messy. The text on top looks good, but the little Subliminal logo on the bottom looks weird there and the website address is too close to the bottom.
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Aug 11 2009, 03:36 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I pretty much agree with Gabi (schizo). You need to work on the coloring so that both the background and cob look the same and you need to work on your cob for sure. It looks like half his face was sliced off.
 I think you should probably use another picture.
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Aug 11 2009, 04:45 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It looks alright but the cobbing is a little choppy. It kinda looks like you chopped the little top of his ear off too. O_O I would suggest that you make him like match with the background colors and stuff or find a different picture. Also, maybe lower the opacity some on your logo text and website text. Also, move the website text up a little bit. Otherwise, looks good man!
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Aug 11 2009, 06:57 PM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
haha i didnt cut him out he was already cut out but he had a white outline around him so when i contracted that render i guess it cut off alot, since it was liek a 4-6 px line around the render
any more tips 2 blend ? ... more gradient maps ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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