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 Aug 6 2009, 12:55 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982  |
I made it for my temple's anniversary. I just thought it'd be interesting to hear others' opinions. And it's sort of important that I don't submit anything "ugly." (:  -THANK YOU! btw, I can get pretty girly with my designs -_-" |
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Aug 6 2009, 01:17 AM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It's pretty good but it seems a bit too bright, imo. The text is also kind of hard to read. >_>
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Aug 6 2009, 01:30 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Its basic, but pretty. You set the contrast and brightness a little too high. And the brushes are a little cliche but they work. You should make the grey bar a little bit transparent.
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Aug 6 2009, 01:41 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
QUOTE(jcp @ Aug 6 2009, 01:30 AM)  Its basic, but pretty. You set the contrast and brightness a little too high. And the brushes are a little cliche but they work. You should make the grey bar a little bit transparent. Thanks! I'll fix it (: I like basic for some reason... QUOTE It's pretty good but it seems a bit too bright, imo. The text is also kind of hard to read. >_> Thanks! brightness seems to be a big problem |x thank you guyss! QUOTE(jcp @ Aug 6 2009, 01:30 AM) Its basic, but pretty. You set the contrast and brightness a little too high. And the brushes are a little cliche but they work. You should make the grey bar a little bit transparent. cliche? bad or good? haha |
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Aug 6 2009, 01:53 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Bad, but only because we are all designers. Brushes are very overused but as a final product it is pretty.
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Aug 6 2009, 01:59 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
Thanks (:
I suddenly wanna start over. haha Any advise brush-wise? I've been trying not to use the ones seen everywhere: that swirly stuff. Anyway, I didn't think it looked too typical? :\ |
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Aug 6 2009, 02:02 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Is this just for personal use? If so then it is fine.
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Aug 6 2009, 02:03 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
haha I guess? It's just something I made just to bring to my temple.
I fixed it!!  -THANKS!  I forgot about the bar -_-"
Reason for edit: Please use the Edit button instead of triple-posting. - Mike
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Aug 6 2009, 03:17 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
It looks pretty clean. :] And it's good you toned down the brightness of the image. I like the colors of the brushes; they go well together. Font looks nice as well, but I think you can find something better.
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Aug 6 2009, 03:18 AM
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 Treasure Pleasure Group: Head Staff Posts: 11,193 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 281,127 |
Posts merged.
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Aug 6 2009, 03:59 AM
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 Nick Group: Member Posts: 78 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,993 |
i think that u should use a different script font. jane austen is a too non formal for the use with an anniversary. mayb somethin a bit cleaner.
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Aug 6 2009, 01:30 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
QUOTE Posts merged. I agree with Mark. There's nothing bad about it, but it's not exactly amazing. I've never been good enough to hit "amazing," but thank you for all the advise! (: I'm going to change the font now. I've never been good with fonts, any ideas? |
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Aug 6 2009, 01:33 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Well its just a small project.
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Aug 6 2009, 01:34 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Maybe some kind of sans-serif font?
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Aug 6 2009, 01:39 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
This might take awhile. My computer can't handle it... My photoshop keeps closing on me!!
 Um... Is that any better? Fonts and I just don't connect too well.... |
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Aug 6 2009, 01:54 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yup, better. :D
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Aug 6 2009, 01:56 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
I searched for new fonts! How does Aubrey look? (:
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Aug 6 2009, 02:50 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
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Aug 6 2009, 05:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Kathy, I merged some of your posts since you were double and triple posting.
I think this one looks the best. Some subtle editing to the photo would look nice as well. :) |
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Aug 6 2009, 06:00 PM
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 Tick tock, Bill Group: Administrator Posts: 8,764 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,948 |
I wish the picture wasn't so high in contrast/brightness. It looks like it's a lovely place. Which temple is that? It reminds me of a temple I used to visit in Hacienda Heights, CA.
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Aug 6 2009, 06:19 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
Thanks! I'm so sorry about all the double posting and etc. I'm new to this stuff |x
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Aug 6 2009, 10:54 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
I AM RE-DOING THIS ENTIRE PROJECT. Took me a day to realize how extremely dead it is. Thank you for all the advise though! <3
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Aug 6 2009, 11:44 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
 I think I like this picture better anyway. So how does this look? Is it better than my other one? Anything I should change on this one? |
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Aug 7 2009, 02:15 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It's alright, but I'd like it better if you removed those little grid lines and the red text is pretty hard to read so you should try darkening that some.
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Aug 7 2009, 03:39 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
My friend told me to remove the heart. Should I do that as well?
Well, I fixed what you told me(: Still deciding about the heart?  |
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Aug 7 2009, 04:05 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Ehh... I think you should just lower the opacity some.
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Aug 7 2009, 04:33 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Your temple is gorgeous.
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Aug 7 2009, 05:10 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
QUOTE Ehh... I think you should just lower the opacity some. Aw.. it's too late, I already printed it. That would have been great though. Everyone else was like either get rid of it or keep it. :\ QUOTE Your temple is gorgeous. Thank you! 30 years haha. |
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Aug 7 2009, 08:12 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Aw, it's still pretty good though!
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Aug 9 2009, 10:37 AM
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 Newbie Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 741,269 |
I think it's preety fantastic...I mean I don't have photoshop or anything but I love it I love the colors and the text
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Aug 10 2009, 11:52 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Aug 2009 Member No: 740,982 |
Thank you, Everyone! I ended up showcasing it without the heart
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