Just another sad poem... read!!! |
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 Jul 12 2004, 11:19 PM
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 Wendy Clear  Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961  |
I'm so alone there's no one here
I clos emy eyes and disappear My world goes quiet and fades to black It is too late I can't go back I remember all those nights alone Stayed up late sitting by the phone All I wanted was just one call Too bad it never came at all Will anyone notice that I'm gone? Is what I have done really so wrong? I couldn't deal with all the pain Another would have drove me insane |
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Jul 12 2004, 11:23 PM
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Wendy Clear Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961 |
Crud I screwed up..........
***Another DAY would have drove me insane. I can't type at all. My apologies. |
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Jul 12 2004, 11:24 PM
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 it onli hurts wen i breathe Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,197 |
thats g0oOd! ;] u got talentt!! keep on writingg!
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Jul 14 2004, 02:59 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
man...ur gifted!!!!! I love this poem!!! It relates to me and my life!
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Jul 16 2004, 12:44 AM
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 ohh gosh no Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,892 |
thats good. Can be related too in some ways for me but yea. its good. Keep writing. everyone likes reading.
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Jul 16 2004, 12:45 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
Wow that's depressing.. very well written too.. I think we can all relate to that in some way..
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Jul 19 2004, 10:44 PM
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 PHIL ˝ Group: Member Posts: 2,663 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,982 |
 ....its like you know me...-Phil- |
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Jul 20 2004, 02:00 AM
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 Visible_TrUst Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,030 |
good job
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Jul 20 2004, 09:55 AM
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 off the wall dork Group: Member Posts: 470 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,070 |
thats pretty good. next time if u made a mistake, u can just edit ur post.
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Jul 20 2004, 10:38 AM
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 Random Rei =) Group: Member Posts: 456 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,490 |
wow. you're really good at writing poems. keep it up!
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Jul 21 2004, 02:42 PM
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Stacy Group: Member Posts: 220 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,199 |
You should read The Phone Call by Dorothy Parker.
Nice poem! Good work. Don't worry about the typos... you can fix it! :-D |
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Jul 21 2004, 09:16 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
o wow i dink its really good nd deep
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Aug 9 2004, 01:27 PM
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 I heart Se7en Group: Member Posts: 82 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,405 |
Great poem! You've got talent so use it.
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Aug 9 2004, 02:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
wow so much talent
i cud neva do stuff like that good job!! |
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Aug 23 2004, 10:34 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 5,585 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,082 |
QUOTE(seriouslynikki @ Jul 14 2004, 2:59 PM) It relates to me and my life! Says it all! |
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Aug 24 2004, 12:37 AM
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I C DEAD PEOPLE Group: Member Posts: 728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 36,002 |
thats good
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