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 Jul 22 2009, 07:40 PM
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 Funride.org  Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299  |
I wanna know what you guys think of my newest design!
Reason for edit: Please use [thumb] tags instead of [img] tags when posting large images. - Mike
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Jul 22 2009, 08:03 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Mike pretty much summed it up in one fell swoop.
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Jul 22 2009, 09:43 PM
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 ٩(●̮̮̃•̃)۶ Group: Official Member Posts: 1,403 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,173 |
The font is kinda floating, so you should probably lower it or put a menu bar under it.
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Jul 22 2009, 09:47 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I agree with Mike. Also, I think it would look better if you erased the stripes that are in front of her (the ones covering her face and skin and everything). The font doesn't really suit the blend and neither does it's gradient. I suggest something more clean and formal like a Sans-Serif font.
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Jul 22 2009, 09:48 PM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
BLEND IN THE TEXT
&& I'm not a fan of that background ._. Ohh. And blend in the content areas :] And those stripes are too opaque-like xD (basically what Mike said. I just wanted to say it again.) |
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Jul 22 2009, 10:53 PM
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 model type = no appetite Group: Member Posts: 137 Joined: Jul 2009 Member No: 737,182 |
perfect description mike!
i love the blending though! and the quality. |
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Jul 22 2009, 11:15 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I agree with everyone one lowering the opacity on the scan lines (or well maybe just erase them off of her), and fixing the font because it's just... there. Also try and move the font a little to the right because it gets cut off. Other than that, I love the blending.
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Jul 23 2009, 03:01 AM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
I love the blending. Use a cleaner looking font, it'll match better (: And basically what Mike said, haha.
Quoted from the Graphics Submission Guidelines: QUOTE(Blaqheartedstar @ Oct 5 2008, 11:27 PM)  Here's a tip: Textures and brushes on the faces of people who are in your graphic do NOT look good. So if you've got some thing like this
 erase whats over the face so it looks like this  A nice soft-edged brush. It'll do the trick. |
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Jul 23 2009, 10:30 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
of all the crapy disney layouts i've seen
this is one of the better ones, your good Demi Lovato looks...really different in that middle picture, cute dress images, but i don't think the smokey effect is doing you any favors though, it would be better if you added more of that bright pink than smoke |
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Jul 23 2009, 11:08 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I hate scanlines so I say take them out completely. Other than that, the blending looks decent. I don't know why, but I actually don't mind the way the text looks. My only suggestion would be to pick colors other than black and gray for the backgrounds. There are some pretty good colors in the photos that you could use.
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