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 Jun 25 2009, 12:36 PM
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First painting thing I have done with my new tablet. Whatcha think? And how can I make it look more like like? I wasnt sure if I should keep the outline but as you can see, I did. I think if I wanted it to be more realistic I should have done it without the black lines/outline. I kinda messed up his left cheek. C&C would be nice. Thanks. |
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Jun 25 2009, 12:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
Everything is good from the bottom up -- all but the head.
It definitely doesn't look realistic, but I do kinda like the cartoon-ish feel. |
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Jun 25 2009, 12:48 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
looks pretty good. i like the cartoony watercolor-ish feel to it. the arms really bug me though becuase of the coloring. they're really white and have no shadow at all. i would color them more to make them look like the face/neck that you have. especially the left one really needs shadowing of some kind.
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Jun 25 2009, 01:09 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Ok. Right now I am using dodge and burn for shadowing. cause if I use the brush and just change the color, it just doesn't look as good. And how can I make it more realistic? Should I just try and add more lighting details?
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Jun 25 2009, 01:23 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
^Yeah, adding more details would help. Also, outlines usually take away from realism a bit, especially when they're really shaky.
I like the different parts of it, but none of them seem to go together. The head, chest, arms, hair, hat, etc. all look like they were done in a different style. I'm in love with the shoes, though. I'm not sure why, but I am. |
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Jun 25 2009, 01:29 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Well as I was drawing I used the outline so I kind of become dependant on it. Here is what it looks like without:
It just looks goofy so that isnt gonna work. But i still like how it looks on everything, except for the face. Heres an update: I tried to add more detail to the face. Especially the nose. Still trying to make the yes look realistic. |
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Jun 25 2009, 01:31 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
arms look way better now. i think the head in general might be too small...i don't know. it seems really small for the body but maybe that's just me.
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Jun 25 2009, 01:35 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Head is way to small, but the body looks really good.
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Jun 25 2009, 01:40 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
haha, I think thats just his body. I outlined pretty much perfectly. I know i know...I outlined it... its a cheap move. Hopefully I will learn to do it just by looking at it in the corner.
Here is the original photograph. And, sure I want it to look like him, but im not trying to mimic him exactly. |
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Jun 25 2009, 02:04 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
I just noticed that the left hand looks really funky.
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Jun 25 2009, 02:08 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
His left, or our left? They both look a little funny. Ill try and fix it.
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Jun 25 2009, 02:16 PM
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Joseph, isn't that you?
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Jun 25 2009, 03:08 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
No, thats my brother. We look alike.
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Jun 25 2009, 03:11 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,801 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 568,102 |
Whoa. Yeah, you do.
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Jun 25 2009, 03:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
 Dont worry. The right on the left is making a face. he isnt retarded. We are brothers. People say we look a like but I dont see it. And this picture is a year old. |
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Jun 25 2009, 03:26 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
You guys look exactly alike. Especially the first 2.
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Jun 25 2009, 03:27 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
wow House of Homos
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Jun 25 2009, 03:31 PM
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 Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
QUOTE(jcp @ Jun 25 2009, 04:22 PM)  Dont worry. The right on the left is making a face. he isnt retarded. We are brothers. People say we look a like but I dont see it. And this picture is a year old. drawing ain't bad either |
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Jun 25 2009, 03:32 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,801 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 568,102 |
Scary similar, Joseph.
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Jun 25 2009, 04:02 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
 As for the drawing, it looks alright but it sorta seems choppy and the head just seems weird/small. Otherwise, it looks good! 
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Jun 25 2009, 04:32 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Maybe you could define the pant wrinkles a little more too.
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Jun 25 2009, 04:46 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
QUOTE(Tung @ Jun 25 2009, 03:27 PM) wow House of Homos lol. Thanks bro. Ok, ill work on the pants. |
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Jun 26 2009, 03:30 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Woah you all look so much alike.
I think your edit looks a lot better. Everything looks nice but adding small details would make it look even better.
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Jun 27 2009, 02:18 AM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
Whoa. Scary.
I think 1 Joseph Cohen is enough D: && I think it looks pretty good Except for the face ._. |
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Jun 27 2009, 06:58 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
wow you and your brothers look so alike
but uh, why drawling? |
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Jun 27 2009, 09:28 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Cause its much more funner to say.
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Jun 27 2009, 03:11 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Wow, you and your sibs look so much alike
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Jun 27 2009, 03:20 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
QUOTE(xzkdxrawrx @ Jun 27 2009, 02:18 AM) Whoa. Scary. I think 1 Joseph Cohen is enough D: && I think it looks pretty good Except for the face ._. Good one. There is a huge height difference between us though. And age. 14, 15 and 18. Next take a I make something with my tablet I will try and make it more like a painting. I think my problem was that I was kind of just tracing then coloring it in. Ill do it more of a style like this. Using lighting to define parts, not lines. Even though in this case, I kept the lines cause I never did his face. |
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