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 Jun 19 2009, 06:28 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527  |
I had an idea for a series of images playing on words ending with the word ship. Does the concept come across easily to you?
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Jun 19 2009, 06:34 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I like the soft colors you used. I love the papery crumble texture.
However, what's with the moon? Are there clouds concealing part of the crescent? |
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Jun 19 2009, 06:44 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I get the concept but uhh... the sun kind of looks weird with those clouds covering it like that. You should make it a little more obvious that the clouds are covering the sun. Looks pretty good so far.
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Jun 19 2009, 06:51 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
OH, IT'S A SUN, LMFAO. i thought it was a moon cus of the angle of the shape. :[ sorry
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Jun 19 2009, 06:53 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
It looks good, but I agree with the others about the moon.
As for the concept, I get it, but I would have no idea what word those images stood for unless you had the word there. I may be able to figure out the leadership one...but I still don't understand the membership one. |
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Jun 19 2009, 06:58 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
Well, my idea of the concept was, the membership stood for the common people who run the ship. the leadership was the one who always gave orders to the people and stands out.
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Jun 19 2009, 07:47 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527 |
Ah the sun is a mistake. I'm so careless. Looking back at it now, I guess the concept really isn't too great. Oh well, back to the drawing board...
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Jun 22 2009, 07:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
The idea's clever but knowing how I am, I wouldn't have gotten the whole "ship" thing right away if you didn't tell us. As far as the actual design, I think it looks really good. I'm really digging the texture you used. And yeah I'd work on the sun. Adding some clouds around it like Mike said, would help.
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Jun 22 2009, 08:38 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
Yeah, I get the concept easily enough.
I like the colors, and how everything looks all crinkly. |
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