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 May 28 2009, 03:47 PM
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 Funride.org  Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299  |
In my opinion I think it's good.
But IDK about the coloring. 
avril_blend.png ( 112.03K )
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May 28 2009, 03:53 PM
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 Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
It's too bright, imo.
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May 28 2009, 04:39 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I like it. its better than your first one, no offence. One thing i want to say is maybe add another little detail possibly behind/below the avril.
Like those brushes that have one of those sentances. |
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May 28 2009, 04:40 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
Do you mean the brushes that have small text you can read?
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May 28 2009, 04:48 PM
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poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
yeah only you cant usually read them sometimes
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May 28 2009, 05:04 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
I just added them!
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May 28 2009, 05:21 PM
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 Adobe Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,237 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,043 |
Looks good, but the text really others me. Is there a way that you could blend the text better with the design? It kinda sticks out like a sore thumb.
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May 28 2009, 07:39 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I agree with Rachael (digitalfrangrance) on the text. Try changing the font to a kind of cursive-ish font I guess. I think it looks a lot better than most of your work! Great Job!
 
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May 29 2009, 12:26 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ May 28 2009, 03:21 PM)  Looks good, but the text really others me. Is there a way that you could blend the text better with the design? It kinda sticks out like a sore thumb. Agreed. Like Natalie said, it looks a bit plain. You should show us your updated version since you said you added some brushes :) But the image on the left is a bit low in quality. |
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May 29 2009, 12:33 AM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 29 2009, 12:26 AM) But the image on the left is a bit low in quality. Yeah.. it looks blurry to me. |
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May 29 2009, 07:46 AM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
It's too blurry and bright imo
And it's kinda small ++ The Avril text just doesn't fit I agree with Mike on the cursive-ish text Cause Avril there is kinda 'elegant' So the text should probably go with that feeling On another note, I prefer the old Avril D: |
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