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make you want to live
ryfitaDF
post Jul 7 2004, 12:25 PM
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MAKE YOU WANT TO LIVE
The sun is shining on my face.
A new day has come.
24 more hours to live and be happy
Whether it’s with you or someone or no one
I have myself, I am myself
And I am all I need

So I’ll
Take a break from being sad
And look at all I’ve ever had
Be grateful for the things I have
And write a song to make you want to live
Be the best I can
Learn from all the s*** I’ve had
I’m fine without a f***ing dad
Singing songs that want to make me live

I gaze into a field of flowers
Or out into the sapphire sea
Another site to gaze into
And help me gaze into how great
You look under the pale moonlight
How great it feels to live tonight
After all, it’s summa time!
I’m grateful just to be alive
Forsaken or not, I love it all

So I’ll
Take a break from being sad
And look at all I’ve ever had
Be grateful for the things I have
And write a song to make you want to live
Be the best I can
Appreciate my awesome friend
And kiss them for its helping hands
Singing songs that want to make them live

(Bridge)

So I’ll
Take a break from being sad
Look at all I’ve ever had
Be grateful for what I have
And write a song to make you want to live
Be the best I can
Appreciate my awesome friends
And kiss them for their helping hands
And write a song to make you want to live


a nice change of pace around here, i think. tell me if you think it's good and if it makes you happy, cause that was it's intention.
 
aZn_hApPy05
post Jul 7 2004, 09:15 PM
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oooo... i like that... did u write it? cus its sooo good.
 
angel-roh
post Jul 8 2004, 02:23 PM
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ahh take a break on sadness and just have a time to make a girl happy =) nice lyric^^ i love reading ur lyrics, lunchbox! ur so cool!
 
ryfitaDF
post Jul 10 2004, 12:02 AM
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yo! read this! it's a good one!
 
Sa-Chan
post Jul 10 2004, 12:11 AM
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Hmm. I envy your writing capabilities. Truly. You are art god and lyric god ^^ I praise you! *praises?*
 
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post Jul 10 2004, 02:13 AM
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I don't know if it really makres me happy but it makes me smile. Does that count?
 
ryfitaDF
post Jul 10 2004, 02:41 AM
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well you smile when you're happy, pleases, or faking it. choose one of those.
 
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post Jul 10 2004, 02:44 AM
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QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jul 10 2004, 3:41 PM)
well you smile when you're happy, pleases, or faking it. choose one of those.

I don't think it's any one of those. pinch.gif Sometimes I just smile for fun. blink.gif Just ignore me, I'm f*cked up.
 
ryfitaDF
post Jul 10 2004, 02:45 AM
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well a smile's more than good enough. happy.gif
 

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