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Titleless poem i wrote
kantoaznboi
post Jul 6 2004, 08:53 PM
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dis is a poem i wrote for someone that broke my heart. dont really have a title 4 it. its long but bear wit me.


I know ill never be with you,
and I think about it everyday,
but you stole my heart,
in many ways.
I can not express,
the pain I felt,
as you told me what
you did not want,
but you’ll always have
a space in my heart,
cause u were everything
I could ask for.

Your Smile
brightens up my life,
and I am left in exile
never to be in strife.
Every time I pass you by,
I can help but see
that twinkle in your eye.

And i wonder,
who stole the heavens,
the majestic beauty,
and placed it upon you,
and made you a siren,
luring me
into your exquisiteness.
You charmed me
with your intelligence and happiness,
with others I can not compare.

You always make me happy,
and you always know what to say.
Your laughter is intoxicating,
which makes me want to be with you
each and everyday.
If we were together,
we would watch the sun set,
and bask in its beauty.
But nothing is as beautiful
as I see that smile on your face.

I know that I’m not the quite
The average guy,
But every time we talk
It’s like I’m on a high,
And I hope that I could be
That white and shining knight,
But then I think to myself,
That day I found out
What you did not want,
And realize we could never be,
And I respect your choice,
But time can only heal my heart.
 
pOOpii_h e a dxD
post Jul 6 2004, 09:18 PM
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awww thats nice i sometimes dun like free style poems but this is real swt and sad in some wayy _smile.gif
 
angel-roh
post Jul 7 2004, 01:35 AM
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man that poem reminds me of someone saying that to me..haha it's like he is writing that poem to me even tho u wrote it, but that's reallie good! u did a nice job to it! hehe it's like one day he found out wat i said to him that hurt him... i told him that he was fat T_T;; i know that's mean...but i had to tell the truth u know heh.
 

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