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 Apr 8 2009, 07:54 PM
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 Irrisistable Cabbages.  Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355  |
I think that I could do better with my layout but I think that this is my best.
I made this in Photofiltre Studio. One of my friends took this picture. I actually know who the two people are in it. I've decided to use my own pics from now on to avoid the copyright hassle. 1st Edit 2nd Edit Sugar-Blossom C&C |
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Apr 8 2009, 08:42 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Not too bad. You're getting a lot better. I would still work on the text on the image though
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Apr 8 2009, 08:48 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah, you are getting better. Although, the layout itself is kind of basic and plain. Also, the image looks a little oversharpened and the text could use some work. The red in the navigation doesn't really fit in with the layout and the image is ehh..dull. It doesn't look much was done to the image except for a few filters and such. Otherwise, nice job.
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Apr 8 2009, 08:58 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
i love the picture, but i think it could use some better editing and text, and it doesn't quite match with the rest of the layout - if you want to match the layout with the picture, use more browns and golds and and greens for the colour scheme.
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Apr 8 2009, 09:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
The image quality isn't very good. It's really blurry. Also, your right column is misaligned by about ten or twenty pixels in IE.
Other than that, it's a bit plain. |
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Apr 8 2009, 10:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Image quality is very low. It hurts my eyes if I stare at it for too long. It's too plain, tbh. Add some more color.
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Apr 8 2009, 11:30 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
agree w/nat & schizo, you really should invest in a better program.
also i honestly hate the text style you have. how about DLin some other fonts & using those, just a suggestion. |
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Apr 9 2009, 06:42 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Apr 8 2009, 08:48 PM)  Yeah, you are getting better. Although, the layout itself is kind of basic and plain. Also, the image looks a little oversharpened and the text could use some work. The red in the navigation doesn't really fit in with the layout and the image is ehh..dull. It doesn't look much was done to the image except for a few filters and such. Otherwise, nice job. Yea I didn't realize until you said it that I still had the red navigation. I'll work on that. QUOTE(elletricity @ Apr 8 2009, 08:58 PM) i love the picture, but i think it could use some better editing and text, and it doesn't quite match with the rest of the layout - if you want to match the layout with the picture, use more browns and golds and and greens for the colour scheme. ok I'll see what I can do with it then I'll post a pic. QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 8 2009, 09:41 PM) The image quality isn't very good. It's really blurry. Also, your right column is misaligned by about ten or twenty pixels in IE. I make it in FF so I don't even know what it looks like in IE so thanks. I'll move it. QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Apr 8 2009, 10:24 PM) Image quality is very low. It hurts my eyes if I stare at it for too long. It's too plain, tbh. Add some more color. I saved it as either a .png or a .jpg I don't remember which. I made it blurry like that if that's what your talking about. QUOTE(shakeene @ Apr 8 2009, 11:30 PM) agree w/nat & schizo, you really should invest in a better program. I'm still waiting to see if my aunt and uncle are going to by CS4 and give me CS3 (photoshop) QUOTE(shakeene @ Apr 8 2009, 11:30 PM) also i honestly hate the text style you have. how about DLin some other fonts & using those, just a suggestion. I could but I really am still trying to work on that whole matching the text with the image type of thing. |
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Apr 9 2009, 06:57 AM
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 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
QUOTE(theerinkal @ Apr 9 2009, 07:42 PM) I saved it as either a .png or a .jpg I don't remember which. I made it blurry like that if that's what your talking about. It's way too blurry. And is there something on it? I can see these line things that look like white with a lower opacity layered on top of the image. Also, if you're trying to match fonts, you really need to download a lot of fonts. The default fonts on your computer probably will only get you so far. With that image, I think an elegant but grungey font will suit it =] |
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Apr 9 2009, 03:58 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
QUOTE(xzkdxrawrx @ Apr 9 2009, 06:57 AM) It's way too blurry. And is there something on it? I can see these line things that look like white with a lower opacity layered on top of the image. Also, if you're trying to match fonts, you really need to download a lot of fonts. The default fonts on your computer probably will only get you so far. With that image, I think an elegant but grungey font will suit it =] ok I'll look for elegent but grungey font. What is the famous font site again? |
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Apr 9 2009, 04:01 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
^Probably dafont.com?
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Apr 9 2009, 04:10 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 9 2009, 04:01 PM) ^Probably dafont.com? YEA that's it lol oh and I'm making another version of this layout so I'll post another updated one once I'm done. |
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Apr 9 2009, 05:33 PM
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poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
still after the edits im not to crazy about the font. You really need to find a colour and font style that will compliment the photo because right now it just looks like you threw any font with any colour under 2 minutes.
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Apr 9 2009, 07:44 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
QUOTE(Tomates @ Apr 9 2009, 05:33 PM) still after the edits im not to crazy about the font. You really need to find a colour and font style that will compliment the photo because right now it just looks like you threw any font with any colour under 2 minutes. ok. I'll put another one up tomorrow. |
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Apr 10 2009, 01:59 AM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
tbh
You don't really need that text there If you want your site name displayed, you'd be better off putting it underneath the image if you can't find a good way to put it on the actual image. Edit: The font still doesn't fit and it still doesn't blend into the image |
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Apr 10 2009, 03:29 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
The actual photo is very nice. But I'm hoping you can do more than just slap [rotated] text onto it. :/
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