Louis Vuitton Promo [Feedback Please], Give me some ideas of what to fix !!!! Rating Options

[deteam]

Was Messing around late tonight and this is what i made . .




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TAKE 3


Leave some feedback and some ideas of what to add and or fix

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[Mikeplyts]

I agree that the purple and red combination doesn't look too good on this. It's kinda plain and basic but it's ok, I guess. Nice job though.

[deteam]

so do u have any suggestions on what colors would match ? lol or should i just use a use a hue/saturation layer to make everything the same color ?

Let me know , also the background is plain gimme some ideas to spice it up

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[Mikeplyts]

Oohh, awesome edit. It looks a lot better now.

[deteam]

Oohh, awesome edit. It looks a lot better now.

nice, thanks alot, you guys got ne other ideas of effects 2 add to it ?

Let me Know

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[Mikeplyts]

I think the edit looks fine as it is.

[none345678]

The text kinda seems squished to me Maybe try some different fonts.

[deteam]

edited it with another version let me know if u like . . .

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[jiyong]

i like the third take, but i think you should change those thick black borders. they don't seem to suit the rest of the graphic. perhaps a different colour, or make the borders thinner? just my personal opinion.

[Mikeplyts]

Oh, I like the 3rd take better now. Although, I agree maybe you should do something about the big black borders. Maybe give them a gradient or kind of make them fade? Idk. Also, maybe lower the reflected text opacity a bit and kind of leave a little space between the regular and reflected text. You could also try adding a little thin line in that space.

[markmejia]

I kinda like the last one.

[Tomates]

why is kanye in it?

[deteam]

why is kanye in it?

ite imma take ur guys advice and try some of that out . . and kanye is in it because it is his new shoe lol $870 Shoes he made that are being distributed by Louis Vuitton . .


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[none345678]

$870? What the hell, is it made out of unicorn skin or what? Damn.

[Simba]

$870? What the hell, is it made out of unicorn skin or what? Damn.

They're made of Kanye West's skin and is dyed red with his blood



on the real Kanye's shoes don't need promoting, just a lower price tag. I would've copped some by now if I could afford

I think I like the third the most

[deteam]

They're made of Kanye West's skin and is dyed red with his blood
on the real Kanye's shoes don't need promoting, just a lower price tag. I would've copped some by now if I could afford

I think I like the third the most

thanks for the feed guys appreciate it alot

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[jiyong]

just thought of it, i think you should make the text at the very top either all red or all black. the first thing i see is "iminal", not "subliminal" - it stands out too much from the rest of the word.

[manny-the-dino]

Your edits got better & better. I like the third one the most. Good job.

[deteam]

Your edits got better & better. I like the third one the most. Good job.

thanks alot really appreciate it . . and guys i tried fading those black bars and doing some other things u guys said but i didnt really like it so i think im going to stick with Edit #3 . . . but thanks all for your generous feedback . . .i really appreciate it . .

Out of all the sites ive been on this is probably the most productive with helping each other

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