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new layout - comments appreciated (:
jiyong
post Feb 27 2009, 06:07 PM
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I made this layout for my personal Myspace, but I'm thinking of submitting it to Createblog and I've never done this sort of style before so I wanted some feedback (: Comments/suggestions, please?

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post Feb 27 2009, 06:15 PM
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It's cute, I guess but it's also a bit basic. Also, the comment section looks cut off near the bottom. Otherwise, I guess you can say it's alright. _smile.gif thumbsup.gif
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 06:23 PM
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I like it. The only thing I would do would be give the background a color.. preferably black :3 I'm not sure how that would look with those black fadey things around the circles. White background + white interiors is just too much white for me.

Overall, though, I think it's great for what it's used for.
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 06:57 PM
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It's pretty cute. happy.gif I like the rollovers. But I think it's a bit too plain. Too much negative space, imo.
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 06:59 PM
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thanks for the comments (:

@mike: i don't see where the comment box is cut off /= i use a mac with firefox/safari but i'll get on a pc and check...

@emberfly: i changed the background to a light grey (:
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 07:39 PM
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Nice update. _smile.gif Also, some of the text is a little bit choppy but it's not really that noticable. :p
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 08:12 PM
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QUOTE(elletricity @ Feb 27 2009, 05:59 PM) *
@emberfly: i changed the background to a light grey (:


I think that made it look way better.. It was definitely too much white.

I think it should have some sort of texture in the background though.. everything is flat and .. flat. Something really faint would be nice. No stripes or dots or anything.. something weird like very faint wood maybe? idk. try a million til something works :D
 
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post Feb 27 2009, 08:18 PM
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@decaydancefbr: i haven't heard of that font before, but i checked it out and i like it much better, all the letters are straight, lol. thanks (:

@emberfly && natalia: i'll try some backgrounds tonight, thanks (:
 
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post Feb 28 2009, 03:56 PM
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i changed the font and made a background image. does it look any better? (:
 
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post Feb 28 2009, 11:56 PM
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I think it looks better now. Cute background you added. :)
 

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