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 Dec 22 2008, 01:57 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 671,706  |
So, I'm relatively new to this whole thing. And, by whole thing, I mean tweaking a photo more than messing with the colors and such and adding a border. I'm trying to take it up a level. Am I doing alright? Does this image look... okay, at least? xD What could I do better? I'm all ears.
And if it's good enough, or could be improved with my current skills (not vurry muny skilz), should I make it a layout? Does the text make any sense? I want to make it seem like she's going into "another world" via book. |
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Dec 22 2008, 08:30 AM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I can't see it. It's a broken image or at least that's how it appears to me. Can you please try to post your image again or as an attachment?
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Dec 22 2008, 05:27 PM
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 Adobe Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,237 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,043 |
It's pretty good!
The light coming out of her head looks kind of out of place. I'm not sure what they are there for... maybe mess with your blending modes a bit. |
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Dec 22 2008, 06:16 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 312 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 597,269 |
I think the light coming out of her head might be wings.. am i correct?
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Dec 22 2008, 06:55 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 671,706 |
http://img375.imageshack.us/ifs/3193/img51...etherealou8.jpg is the link. Maybe that'll work?
Yeah. The stuff coming out of the head was something that I wasn't sure about. It's just light beams. xD |
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Dec 22 2008, 11:42 PM
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 Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,682 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,187 |
the brushes are a little blurry (ones on her back) perhaps move them back a bit?
looks pretty cool. The dots on her face are really noticeably lower the opacity. looks odd. |
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Dec 23 2008, 01:50 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Oh, I can see it now. Looks cool and abstract, but the only thing I don't like is the text; like it doesn't fit with the image somehow but I guess you could leave it that way and I would focus on what everyone else said. Otherwise, nice job.
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Dec 24 2008, 09:11 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 312 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 597,269 |
I actually like the text.. but it would probably look better if it didn't fade into such a white color.. hmm darker?
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Dec 24 2008, 03:04 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
like this . . . pretty good for a beginner . .
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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