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I Am From, english assignment
Ekay
post Oct 26 2008, 04:09 PM
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I am from a land where elders are respected
Where a Buddha necklace stay hangin' where my neck is
To a memory in the past that my life can't outlast
But I'm from a time that rhymes oh-so-sensual
In an era that is oh-so-sexual
Where it's hard to be complacent
But where I'm from I knew where my place meant
And my placement is right here
Through all the long years
I stand rigid, without fidget, next to family and friends
With them, my path will never end
 
Harp
post Oct 31 2008, 12:11 PM
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I like it :D
 
Ekay
post Nov 11 2008, 03:59 PM
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Lol, Thank you :]
 
viniamcfly
post Nov 11 2008, 09:50 PM
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Thats nice
I like the first stanza
"I am from a land where elders are respected
Where a Buddha necklace stay hangin' where my neck is"

that really gets people interested
and makes them want to read more
 
Ekay
post Nov 12 2008, 12:25 AM
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Lol, thank you. I hope it gets them interested :]
 

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