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Aug 24 2008, 11:15 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 679,874 |
Well, I recently opened my own website. It is, at the moment, a personal blog, but I hope to add onto it, or to create a resources website of my own. ^_^ What I would like to know is if you like the current design? Do you think the navigation is easy to see and understand? When I went simple, did I go too simple? I know it's a terrible coding job, but I wanted to just try it out. Thanks to multiple CSS sites, I at least got it to where it is. I don't know though. I'm not sure if it's anything outstanding... Here's the link: http://allievo.webs.com Opinions? |
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Aug 24 2008, 11:44 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
I love it:) Its so simple and the word that springs to mind is.. eloquent.
I like the navigation. Its simple but nice =) |
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Aug 25 2008, 12:09 AM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 679,874 |
Thanks. ^_^ I'm glad you like the navigation. I wasn't sure if a list navigation would have been better, but when I tried it, it just didn't look right.
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Aug 25 2008, 01:54 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
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Aug 25 2008, 03:28 PM
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It's cute and simple. I like it. I think adding rollovers to the navigation wouldn't hurt though.
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Aug 25 2008, 03:37 PM
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![]() Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,682 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,187 |
i agree, while they do blend in a rollover can help in distinguishing the fact that they do go somewhere or they are clickable.
Pretty awesome CSS work, although there isn't much to base that on, the content font choice is awesome, the spacing is good too easy to read and its not in serif... very good thing. |
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Aug 25 2008, 03:43 PM
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![]() Hello Newman. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 912 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 578,620 |
cuute.
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Aug 25 2008, 03:44 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I agree about the rollovers. For a layout that's so simple, something small like that really spruces it up without ruining anything. Very nice, though. Great job.
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Aug 25 2008, 05:23 PM
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the name's mario ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,270 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 656,520 |
it's nice but yeah i also think you should add rollovers
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Aug 25 2008, 05:38 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,237 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 648,123 |
very nice :D
& i'm with everyone else on the rollover idea. it also might help if you change the link text to a slightly blended different color. they seem a little to part of the image. |
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Aug 25 2008, 06:12 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
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Aug 25 2008, 06:21 PM
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 679,874 |
Thanks for the suggestions guys! Er...where can I find a roll-over code? I don't know how to do that... D:
I'ma n00b. |
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Aug 25 2008, 06:29 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I have a tutorial here, and there are several in the scripts & tutorials section on this site.
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Aug 25 2008, 08:08 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 |
Simple and cute...but where is the credit for the flower?
Don't mean to sound rude or anything. |
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Aug 25 2008, 08:09 PM
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![]() asdfghjkl; ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,121 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 665,416 |
it's extremely simple. but its GREAT.
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Sep 1 2008, 03:09 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
i like this ,it simple & im not a big fan of simple.
it makes me happy when i see it. and also i think of winnie the pooh. iunno why tho, ha |
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Sep 2 2008, 01:02 AM
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最高のLady ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 300 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,808 |
that's hot right there
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Sep 2 2008, 02:44 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
The simplicity turns me on.
I can never make green look sexy. :[ |
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Sep 2 2008, 06:44 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
The simplicity of it is so wonderful.
(No one said wonderful O: and I did) Like a lot of others said, I really like the green. Roll-overs wouldn't hurt The right side looks a bit empty. Everyone said about everything I was going to D: But, great job. |
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Sep 2 2008, 01:32 PM
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![]() Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,682 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,187 |
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Sep 2 2008, 04:52 PM
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![]() define our lives for us. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
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