Vampire story, please help! or just read and reply! |
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 Aug 19 2008, 02:41 PM
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 i call it love<333  Group: Member Posts: 134 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 448,479  |
Okay I'm writing a vampire story and I've only come up with one lame title.
I'll Post up the first chapter. (i've written up to 8 chapters so far) Tell me what you think PLEASE! Should I change anything? What don't you like about it. And if you can even think of a title that is okay for me to use, please let me know! Thank you!         |
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Aug 26 2008, 11:12 PM
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Ok, so I didn't read all of it (it was giving me a headache), but you should think about posting it up on fictionpress.com.
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Aug 26 2008, 11:14 PM
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^ i didn't read it, because it hurt my eyes the way
you posted it . i love to read, so please repost it (in your cb blog or something) |
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Sep 3 2008, 06:50 PM
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i call it love<333 Group: Member Posts: 134 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 448,479 |
oh okay thank you. Please read it and let me know what you think :)
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Sep 3 2008, 06:52 PM
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i call it love<333 Group: Member Posts: 134 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 448,479 |
QUOTE(----- @ Aug 26 2008, 11:12 PM)  Ok, so I didn't read all of it (it was giving me a headache), but you should think about posting it up on fictionpress.com. oh okay, well i will post it in my cb blog (if i can find it.) maybe you can read it then, and tell me what you think, please? |
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