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1st Myspace Layout., boring topic title! haha
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post Aug 17 2008, 03:08 PM
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be as critical as you want, I could take suggestions :).
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(i use firefox and it looks ok to me, its simple, i like simple)
 
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post Aug 17 2008, 04:57 PM
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It's pretty good for a first layout. I'm not a fan of the color of the content area. It doesn't really fit with everything else. Other than that, I like it. The music player is pretty cool.
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 12:44 PM
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i like it. its really cool. the only thing that bothers me is that there is a really long vertical scroll bar, when there is nothing below the div. but its really nice.
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 01:31 PM
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I really like it, and i like the colours also i think they look fine together.
Also, cute little ipod on the side
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 03:07 PM
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I think it would have been nicer if you could find a way to incorporate the little music player better into the picture, it's just seems randomly placed. It's a cute idea though.
I really like it though, i think it's cool how it's your own art work. Good job (:
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 04:30 PM
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QUOTE(schizo @ Aug 17 2008, 05:57 PM) *
It's pretty good for a first layout. I'm not a fan of the color of the content area. It doesn't really fit with everything else. Other than that, I like it. The music player is pretty cool.


thanks
when you say content area, is that the area with my info? would you go with a different color to help make it fit?

QUOTE(kreios @ Aug 18 2008, 12:15 PM) *
I think uses that particular texture on all parts of the layout may be a bit overboard. I think the layout is actually quite nice. Not a fan of the color choices, but to each his own. And maybe the metallic text doesn't match the rest of the layout, and looks really awkward. But that may just be me being really critical


thankyou
i thought the same about the texture as well. i dunno, i think i went lunatic on that texture stuff. haaha

QUOTE(nikx618 @ Aug 18 2008, 01:44 PM) *
i like it. its really cool. the only thing that bothers me is that there is a really long vertical scroll bar, when there is nothing below the div. but its really nice.


thanx
yea, i think i fixed it. it was one of those myspace apps (grafitti) i had. i removed it, does it look better?

QUOTE(Tomates @ Aug 18 2008, 02:31 PM) *
I really like it, and i like the colours also i think they look fine together.
Also, cute little ipod on the side


whythankyou

QUOTE(jerusalem @ Aug 18 2008, 04:07 PM) *
I think it would have been nicer if you could find a way to incorporate the little music player better into the picture, it's just seems randomly placed. It's a cute idea though.
I really like it though, i think it's cool how it's your own art work. Good job (:


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yea haha, it is randomly placed. i'll figure something out.
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 05:26 PM
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i think the texture is overused.
but then again - to each is own =)


the music player IS infact in a random place.
but again - to each is own.

=) love it though.
awesome ass first layout.

i have no room to talk
my first layout/s were awful.
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 05:46 PM
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when you say content area, is that the area with my info? would you go with a different color to help make it fit?


Yep, that's what I'm referring to. I don't know what kind of color would look better, to be honest, but I think maybe something a little more neutral?
 
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post Aug 18 2008, 09:34 PM
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I think it looks nice.

But I don't like the placement of the music player.
 
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post Aug 21 2008, 02:05 AM
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this is a great first layout :D


i see what schizo is saying, too... but as for what color to change it to, I'm clueless. because it does match the artwork to the left, it's just... in comparison with the rest of the layout; it seems a bit ... idk >0>;

the text is my biggest concern though... the metallic effect... idk at first glance i liked it, but the more i look at it, the less i like it.

all in all though, it's nice :D
 
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post Aug 23 2008, 08:33 PM
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thumbsup.gif The layout is cool, and this is your first layout!? mann i wish i started out as good as you laugh.gif
 
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post Aug 23 2008, 11:06 PM
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I like it but I dont like the text at the top. I think It doesnt go with the layout at all. But overall its nice.
 
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post Aug 24 2008, 12:52 AM
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Dude, I thought you were a chick.

Anywho, its good for a first. I wish it blended in a bit more with the plain black background. Also the ipod I believe it was randomly on the left side seems mis placed.
 
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post Aug 26 2008, 10:05 AM
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This is really nice! Especially for a first attempt. I dont like the font on the image though... that's my only complaint.
 

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