"living sleep", yet again, another poem |
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 Jun 22 2008, 12:23 PM
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Walk a living sleep
Through a living hell Step by step Piece by piece I am breaking Love what is love But love equals pain Love equals sorrow Love is a hell That cannot speak But can only break And tear And swallow our hearts whole Fear every moment Fear every lie Don’t let love take you for a fool For that is easier done Than making love work |
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Jul 24 2008, 12:21 PM
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you've got strong emotion and must have a level of unseen deepness. you're a hell of a writer
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Jul 25 2008, 12:14 AM
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GREAKAZOID RCDcrewmember MODLION 1st class MODPIGGY 2nd class... Group: Member Posts: 211 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 624,214 |
Thanks allot =D
It's really cool hearing Compliments & even critiscism. Thanks for taking the time and reading this. =] |
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