wow you hurt me, poem |
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 Jun 18 2008, 12:07 AM
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 here, here, and here  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,301 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 206,103  |
I wrote this long ago.
I was i so gulible, making me feel like, like that last summer ago, you made me believe what I wanted, therfore hurting me in the process, That was stupid of me to know what you thought, I knew it but I just faught, faught knowing that you didn't like me the way you did, all these feeling blowing up in me that i hid, I found you with another person, making me feel worst and, I hate you for what you are, making me hurt by far by far the worst feeling i've felt, this feel feeling I've delt, that i felt I belong, belong to you I'm done with you goodbye and so long. ______________________ I am tired of your games, making me feel the same, saying you want me, and saying we could be, I caught you in you little plan, but why can't I let you go? it confused m on how much you wanted me, did you just want me for sex,I don't know, did that girl make you fiinish? making you feel like you win and, what an ass I say, when I see your face i'll make you pay, if you want you dick some where, stick it up your ass right there. 
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Jun 18 2008, 03:42 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
QUOTE(aimeesayswhat @ Jun 17 2008, 10:07 PM)  I wrote this long ago. I was i so gulible, making me feel like, like that last summer ago, you made me believe what I wanted, therfore hurting me in the process, That was stupid of me to know what you thought, I knew it but I just faught, faught knowing that you didn't like me the way you did, all these feeling blowing up in me that i hid, I found you with another person, making me feel worst and, I hate you for what you are, making me hurt by far by far the worst feeling i've felt, this feel feeling I've delt, that i felt I belong, belong to you I'm done with you goodbye and so long. ______________________ I am tired of your games, making me feel the same, saying you want me, and saying we could be, I caught you in you little plan, but why can't I let you go? it confused m on how much you wanted me, did you just want me for sex,I don't know, did that girl make you fiinish? making you feel like you win and, what an ass I say, when I see your face i'll make you pay, if you want you dick some where, stick it up your ass right there. those particular lines stand out most to me because shit like that is true and happens fighting against the truth and the lies of a persons thought. Whether to believe in or the other. its was good keep on writing. |
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Jun 18 2008, 03:51 AM
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 The Resident Drunk Group: Head Staff Posts: 8,623 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,266 |
That was a hell of a poem. Job well done grasshopper.
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Jun 19 2008, 08:46 PM
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here, here, and here Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,301 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 206,103 |
thankss =]
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