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All I Know |
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I made this simple poem when I was still in college, hope you'll like it somehow.
![]() I dont know what to do I've been almost loving you Since that day I fall, I know But i'm afraid to show The love lines beneath my heart And now its time to take a start For some says we're different, we can never be and we were not meant to be But now all I know is that it's hard to surrender a heart especially when it only owes you.. ----------------------------------------------- By the way, here's the title of my favorite blog, hope you can check it out too. Auto Repair & Auto Parts Information. Thanks. :) |
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Did you mean
"Since that day I fell"? and/or "For some say we're different" ? It's a good start, imo. It just seems a bit unfinished. ![]() |
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