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All I Know
jamzky
post May 22 2008, 08:47 PM
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I made this simple poem when I was still in college, hope you'll like it somehow. biggrin.gif

I dont know what to do
I've been almost loving you
Since that day I fall, I know
But i'm afraid to show
The love lines beneath my heart
And now its time to take a start

For some says we're different,
we can never be and we were not meant to be
But now all I know is that
it's hard to surrender a heart
especially when it only owes you..

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post Jun 2 2008, 12:35 PM
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Did you mean

"Since that day I fell"?
and/or
"For some say we're different" ?

It's a good start, imo. It just seems a bit unfinished. shrug.gif
 

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