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 Jun 24 2004, 01:31 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
just a little somthin i threw together to not get rusty.
Have you ever been… To a plane no one has seen… Where the sky is crimson night… And the sun doth propel light… Where you cannot stand… With frozen egg timer sand… Where the demon stares you down… And the stars have all burnt out… Midnight witches sing their songs Fiends scavenge all night long For a virgin soul One to rape and fudge as an addition to the toll I call this place… And the sirens sound… For the fall of a guard once known for being profound… And the creatures stir… In their content: beyond flesh or fur… As the moonlight pleas… The atmosphere of here will drive you to your knees… From the long dead hope… Dream of salvation in the hangman’s rope! Midnight witches sing their song As fiends scavenge all night long For a flower bright for their sordid seed infest One to vandalize and spoil to their heart’s content I call this place… (solo) Where we exchange our souls for dope Because on centuries we’ve forgotten how to cope And a place to claim the life of innocence Where we still believe when someone says “god bless” I call this place HOME! I call this place HOME! You call this place HELL! I call this place HOME! |
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Jun 25 2004, 11:34 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
*clap clap* Just hows how people have conflicting ideas.
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Jun 26 2004, 12:11 PM
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 short one Group: Member Posts: 469 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,284 |
oo i liked it gj
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Jun 26 2004, 12:12 PM
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im' edible Group: Member Posts: 1,529 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,022 |
gg! haha...nice. that could be a song ! ^^
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Jun 26 2004, 06:05 PM
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grrowl Group: Member Posts: 393 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,727 |
lovely =]]]]]
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Jun 27 2004, 01:51 PM
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 ohh gosh no Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,892 |
QUOTE(Mini @ Jun 26 2004, 12:12 PM) gg! haha...nice. that could be a song ! ^^ Agreed that should be a song!=D |
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Jun 27 2004, 09:38 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 30 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,487 |
wow!! that's frickin awesome dude!! do you have a band or something? because that seriously is a hit... because so many people can relate to it. again, awesome job!! <33
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Jun 27 2004, 10:12 PM
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 ÖÐÎÄÈí¼þ Group: Member Posts: 2,072 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,655 |
That is just amazing....wow.....it should be a song :D Really, as beautiful as COF lyrics :D
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Jun 27 2004, 11:52 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(Luster Soldier @ Jun 27 2004, 10:12 PM) That is just amazing....wow.....it should be a song :D Really, as beautiful as COF lyrics :D hehe. i actually put "sleepless" on repeat while writing that. |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:40 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow lunchbox! u did truly an amazing writing there! the lyrics sounds awesome!! lols ^___^ millions stars for u! wow u wud be a great singer! i just prayed for u like a while ago. i told God that u will be the perfect singer in the band cause of making good lyrics!
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Jul 7 2004, 03:07 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
aaw thanks!
but see their's the part of the song "Where we still believe when someone says “god bless”" i don't think god would want me to sing that. hehe |
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Jul 7 2004, 08:56 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
wowsorzs... thats madd good... *clapsorsz*
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