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 Feb 20 2008, 09:17 AM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth  Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459  |
collage style. But I'm not feeling this piece. Something about it makes me hate it.
http://fragmentx.deviantart.com/art/Michael-Buble-77892151 |
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Feb 20 2008, 10:57 AM
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 <joke> inside </joke> Group: Official Member Posts: 2,283 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 470,590 |
ooo, i like =]
i think the images of the guy could have a border or something, though.they look like they were just randomly placed there otherwise, i like it =] |
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Feb 20 2008, 11:06 AM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
i thin it's pretty good, although the right side feels quite a bit heavier than the left.
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Feb 20 2008, 11:17 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 3,291 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 503,024 |
Michael Buble is an amazing singer, And so is this piece of work.
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Feb 20 2008, 12:43 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Feb 20 2008, 11:06 AM)  i thin it's pretty good, although the right side feels quite a bit heavier than the left. maybe i'll change the lyrics around. QUOTE(SilentLaugh @ Feb 20 2008, 10:57 AM) ooo, i like =] i think the images of the guy could have a border or something, though.they look like they were just randomly placed there otherwise, i like it =] what kind of border were you thinking? |
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Feb 20 2008, 04:11 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 22 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,259 |
thats pretty good, could have done without the sparks and yeah the ouline would have also looked nice
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Feb 20 2008, 04:33 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
i'll try to find something to outline it.
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Feb 20 2008, 04:40 PM
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 The Resident Drunk Group: Head Staff Posts: 8,623 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,266 |
What is so special about this guy?
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Feb 20 2008, 04:40 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
he's good
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Feb 20 2008, 04:41 PM
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The Resident Drunk Group: Head Staff Posts: 8,623 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,266 |
Oh gee, that helped.
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Feb 20 2008, 04:43 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
good singers are good. that's what's so good about them. goodness
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Feb 20 2008, 07:00 PM
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 rorhinna Group: Member Posts: 331 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 432,214 |
he has an excellent voice which expresses
his awesome lyrics in a "good" way to nice contemporary music. I like the piece, cept I'm not digg'n the sparks sooo much, but its still nice with them too. |
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Feb 20 2008, 07:05 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
I like this, actually. It's way different from what you usually make, which I think is good.
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Feb 20 2008, 09:02 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 631 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 619,081 |
I can see why you dont like it. Its horrible.
Kidding, of course. I really like it. I absolutely love michael buble. And like jc said, the right feels a bit heavier than the left. But overall its great. |
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Feb 20 2008, 09:14 PM
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 Adobe Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,237 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,043 |
This is great Ryan - expcept the light texture used on the photos of him... I think it's a little too bright.
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Feb 20 2008, 09:27 PM
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GD. <3 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,222 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 198,566 |
i like it.
the only thing the bothers me is the alignment of some of the pictures and text. i like the whole slightly unaligned concept, but some of it is too close to being aligned, which makes it just look wrong unaligned. not sure if that makes sense. the way his last name is written kinda bothers me too, since its not aligned with anything. XD! but that's just all nitpicking. nicely done. |
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Feb 20 2008, 09:46 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
thanks for the comments and critiques. I will definitely take in some of the advices.
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Feb 20 2008, 11:59 PM
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 sugar and spice Group: Member Posts: 769 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,477 |
I like it! I actually like the light textures. The only thing that bothers me is the purple picture. Other than that, nice work. :D
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Feb 21 2008, 12:59 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
I like it, I kind of agree with agiri about the pictures/text. Otherwise it's good
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Feb 21 2008, 01:10 AM
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 sang loves hayden. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
I really like this, it looks good IMO. Slightly different from your other work. I notice that you like to use those diagonal things on the wallpaper since you use that often.
Good job Ryan. |
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Feb 21 2008, 10:32 AM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
^yeah, the stripes are my go-to brush, when I'm stump on what to use.
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Feb 21 2008, 09:24 PM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
i really like everything about it..michael buble is amazing!~great job
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Mar 10 2008, 06:04 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
i made some changes. Check it out.
I still don't know what to do with the images. |
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Mar 10 2008, 06:09 PM
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 isketchaholic Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,977 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 516,154 |
I don't know what it was like before, but i feel like the top right corner is weighed down because the background behind the top right image extends over, making it seem like a part of the picture. the problem with that is that the background edge touches the center picture as well, creating a big blob of image. maybe it's just me, but I feel like there needs to be a consistency in terms of border/spaces between pictures?
and I'm not toooo comfortable with the fact that you cut his head off LOL, but that's just my take on it. everything else looks fine! |
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Mar 11 2008, 12:04 AM
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I like it. The only thing i dislike is the turquoise border to the right. But i think without it, the graphic would look too plain. Nevertheless, nice job.
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Mar 11 2008, 12:32 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,388 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,129 |
Wow, it looks like the inside of a CD booklet.
Maybe you could fade those diagonal lines on the left into the left picture? I don't know, I feel like the edges of the top two pictures are too ... bare? I do like the simplicity of the bottom one though. It's really nice though!
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