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Glitter
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post Jan 30 2008, 08:15 PM
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Slender quivering girl
Thrusting glitter down
his throat.
She stands there, adamant,
A splinter in your side.

He says he can't stomach your
glossy ways, shrouded by
a sliver of your habits
merely a lode to disguise.

Bulbous conscious
How it ails you
Effusive lover of his
flutters in your ear.

"You pushed him far to me"
A stale bitch a splinter in your side
 
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post Feb 2 2008, 12:10 AM
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That's what she said.
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I must say that this poem is much different from any of the few poems that I've read here on cB. I really like the whole glitter concept. Although, I'm wondering what the glitter represents...
 
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post Feb 2 2008, 10:01 PM
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It's supposed to represent materialism.
 

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