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 Jan 5 2008, 09:59 PM
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 One Love.  Group: Duplicate Posts: 1,079 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 410,480  |
He said nobody else ever loved him,
That's why he'd get high enough to go touch the heavens above him Vividly remembers every pipe, every needle that stuck him Every alley he ever stepped in, every purse that he snuck in Every level of hell he's been to and the one that he's stuck in The one he can't escape, even though it's of his own construction Maybe you can relate, maybe you're one of those that just doesn't Maybe he doesn't care, loves to allow these demons to come in |
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Jan 6 2008, 12:04 AM
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 That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
Moved to Writing.
Hope you don't mind, I just felt thats its more appropriate. |
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Jan 6 2008, 09:36 PM
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 <joke> inside </joke> Group: Official Member Posts: 2,283 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 470,590 |
oh, wow. i love this poem because it has meaning. its not a subject you often read poems about (at least for me). i love things about real life problems. this is a great poem =]
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Jan 10 2008, 06:15 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 4,750 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,581 |
Brings a sense of reality in life, I like this one too. You should write another one and see how that turns out.
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Jan 13 2008, 11:20 AM
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 CheccMate Foo! Group: Member Posts: 839 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 487,531 |
I respect the honesty of this piece. Can definitely view the harshness through his eyes. Stay real.
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Jan 14 2008, 09:15 PM
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kudos to that.
that was amazing.
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