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[Senta]

_delete. :]

[MissHygienic]

First one: Well, I don't exactly know what you did to the image, but the text is off-center and that just bugs the hell out of me. I know it's a stock image, but the image is god damned boring. It's a dull gray, and she's just walking right in the center of the picture. Boring.

Second one: It's not necessarily bad, but there's too much contrast. The pictures in black are overexposed, and so you have this completely black and white and off-white pictures blending together. It's not really pleasant to my sight.

[Senta]

^ Omg, thank you for the honesty. XD (I'mma be working on that xD)


`Like I said, I'm a n00b. Baby monkeys could do better than me :)


But seriously though, thank you. :]

[dustbunny]

i like the way the text is done in the first image, but you might want to lessen the effect of what you did to it so that it's still legible. the word running is rather difficult to make out at first glance

[MissHygienic]

^ Omg, thank you for the honesty. XD (I'mma be working on that xD)
`Like I said, I'm a n00b. Baby monkeys could do better than me :)
But seriously though, thank you. :]

Totally my pleasure. Kudos to you for taking it well. I "criticize" with the best intentions. :)

[superficial]

First image: The font doesn't go good with the image, and what kind of effect were you trying to go for? I can barely even see the words. Oh and if you wanted to have a grunge effect for the font, you could have just used a grunge font instead of using a cursive font (which was totally out of the effect) and putting whatever the hell those crap on top of the text were. The image used isn't all that great either. It's too plain and dull. You should add more brushes and textures.

Second image: Why is Hyori Lee light purple on the left image? Bad image quality. Again, the font is horribly chosen, and please, the drop shadow or the background text is extremely annoying. It's so far apart that it's unable to be read. Also, the text that's getting into the picture of Hyori in the middle is useless since part of her name is covern. It just looks like the two darker images were just placed anywhere. The two lighter images are good though.

[tailoredtrouble]

i really really love the first one, i like the weird hard to read text and the simpleness of it. the second one is a little boring, but it's a nice idea and good blending, it just needs something to spice it up a little.

[dannyordinary]

It doesn't matter if you are a noob, you've come to the right place, lots of creative people around here to help.

1. Doesn't really seem like a point. The text feels out of place.

2. Way to much going on at once. I suggest focusing on one subject, even though there is more than one person.