Books Im writing, I hope this is in the right spot Options

[fatbottomgirl]

Thanks for clicking.. I would like to get some feedback on a book I'm writing, but Im too shy to ask anyone I know. This is my first attempt at ever writing, and I never had any classes or anything, so it might be a little rough. I made a little website you can go to to read it.
Its a teen novel.

There is only one chapter so far, but I broke it down even more so its easier to read. I want to eventually get to about 15.

Please be honest, but gentle! Thanks guys.

Natalie Neurotic