can you gove me some writing advice? Options

[Watttt]

hey i was writing a short zombie fic and i needed help with a transition. when the dead start rising i wanted it to be announced on the radio but the main character doesnt listen and changes the channel. so really i want him to be flipping through channels and hearing the beggining of each one but have it be cut of but i dont know how to flip through channels without it being akward. can someone help?

[*superstitious*]

Have you written up to the part where he is listening to radio, right before the announcement? If so, would you mind posting a snippet so that we can see the mood you have set? That way it might be a little simpler to see how the transition might/could be.

[*Moderator*]

I would usually make it start off with dialogue. Something along the lines of:

"And the yankees bring it home again! This is the--

"Police have arrested Joesph Lee for his--

"The president has announce their promo--

(Main character name here) sighed. Clicking his finger against the button of the remote, he scurried to find something interesting, but alas it did not come.

[Watttt]

thank you that hit the nail on the head =]

[*Moderator*]

^ Don't mention it. Unless you meant Rebecca then...disregard this comment. Haha