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 Jun 16 2004, 03:07 PM
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 pixel hybrid  Group: Member Posts: 6,410 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,081  |
Its a very very good story.
 Its really good. I hope you guys find this.. and read it. It made me cry. This is very brilliant!  Brown Eyes |
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Jun 17 2004, 12:58 PM
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Oh my gosh. That is sad. It didn't make me cry, but still...it's a good story. You know what, it seemed like my life was going to be similar until high school and stupid pot head friends got to him.
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Jun 17 2004, 01:12 PM
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Aww that put a tear to my eye...man some people can write some powerful stuff.
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Jun 19 2004, 03:48 AM
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That's so sad... She has so much hope. Perhaps it is people like this that get the happy endings...
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Jun 19 2004, 11:24 AM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
It's not a movie...things always turn out right in movies...
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Jun 21 2004, 12:10 AM
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pixel hybrid Group: Member Posts: 6,410 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,081 |
Guys..there's 10 chapters by the way! It's on the top righthand corner!
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Jul 20 2004, 09:30 PM
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 DefJam Gangsta Inc Group: Member Posts: 914 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,652 |
Greetings!!
OMG!! i almost cried while reading thru it. it just filled me in. call me a SNAG but tat's a beautiful piece. THUMBS UP!! CHEERS CB!! |
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Jul 20 2004, 09:55 PM
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 Hi! I'm Dani :) Group: Member Posts: 5,637 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,369 |
man that story is realli sad. didnt make me cry since i've heard even sadder stories. whoever wrote that story is a good writer. i realli like the happi ending
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Jul 20 2004, 10:14 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
I cried so hard ..
 especially when at the end when she was tellin him her feelings for him ....
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Jul 21 2004, 02:40 PM
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Stacy Group: Member Posts: 220 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,199 |
Read it and loved it. Oh my gosh, I think I'm going to cry again...
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Jul 21 2004, 04:10 PM
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ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
i read it AGAIN!! lol ... love the story xP
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