poem, 9/11/01 memory |
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 Jun 15 2004, 06:46 PM
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 spiCy*  Group: Member Posts: 38 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,758  |
i wrote this a little while ago. RIP all victims & thier families.
Before September 11th, The U.S. was a happier place. There were two tall buildings, Now ashes are in their space. Many more people were alive. Now they are missing and wanting to survive. Those men thought they were giving back, But all they did was take away, And now we continue to remember it, every single day. We cried so hard, we know it hurt, Seeing all those bodies in the ashes and dirt. But we stand together every single day, In hopes that someday, it will go our way. Now we're in a circle of hopes and prayers, But we feel so close, we are trapped in layers. Layers of fear Layers of war Layers of thoughts Layers of gore We cant get those images out of our heads, and now they haunt us when we lie in our beds. **September 11, 2001** |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 15 2004, 07:32 PM
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That's a nice little poem.
 Well, did you originally write it as a song?
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Jun 15 2004, 07:34 PM
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 Quand j'étais jeune... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 6,826 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,272 |
I love the repition of "layers".
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Jun 15 2004, 09:22 PM
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 Huggs Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,457 |
very touching!!! i really liked it!! keep writing!
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Jun 16 2004, 01:54 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
hehe.
SWOOOOOOOOOOOORN! SWORN ENEMY! a NY hardcore song about 9-11 sworn enemy by sworn enemy |
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Jun 20 2004, 06:05 PM
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spiCy* Group: Member Posts: 38 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,758 |
thx ill keep writin.
and ill try it as a song..... |
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