Grind On The Floor, Were bakc =P |
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 Jun 22 2007, 06:43 PM
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 hai, Im Philjay  Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964  |
New song is out by us
 . Were back this time ARJUNA IS ON IT  doing his turntable thing. Yeah, we kinda rushed the final edit. >.< Sorry if we suck lol. Theme of the song is a dancingish type instead of our more.. previous emotional song we last did. Yeah, J.So sang off tune a bit, and she didn't wanna fix it. Sibling hatred, ya know? Br3aker4lyfe, Atrack, J.So, Arjuna - Grind On The Floor LYRICS Br3aker4lyfe: Look at her (Shes sexy) Look at her (Shes fine) Look at her (Shes mine) Look at her (Shes sexy) Look at her (Shes fine) Look at her (Shes mine) Look at her Look at her Yeah, Uhuh Br3aker4lyfe: Hey girl why messin with that fool Grinding up and down all over his tool Let me tell you What I wanna do Lets grind on the floor just me and you Let me show you That I'm feelin you Put my nice lips all over you Lemme kiss ya body until in the morning two Yeah babe I wanna ride you too! J.So: People are so phony Nosy coz they're lonely Aren't you sick of the same thing? They say so and so was dating Love you or they're hatin When it doesn't matter anyway Cuz we're here tonight Br3aker4lyfe & J.So If you smiling, that should set the tone Just be limber baby If you let go, the music should groove your bones Baby just remember Atrack: Now grind on me like I was pretty ricky Move ya hips to the beat nah its not tricky Grinding as you move ya hips Grinding isn't that song made by clipse? So sick how u dip it real low Sorry Milian but she grinds like a pro I know shes a pro, cause I feel it down below I know cause her ass is like WOAH I know I'm young but I feel the connection Down belows telling me I need protection I know it's wrong but what I'm telling you is true Just grinding with you is making my balls blue Br3aker4lyfe: First time I saw you I was in a shock Cuz the way that you looked made my body drop I fell on the floor, looking for no more Cuz I never seen a girl like you before Whoa Howd you get so fly I guess you to fly Just to say goodbye from the smile from the lips All the way down to your hips I wanna grab ur body n give that body a lil kiss Hold up, what you mean, I cant get a kiss? Grinding up and down holding dem hips Baby, you decide that I ain't your guy Ain't gon lie ,Me in your space but Im lovin the way you move your waist nd the way your lips taste Dam girl why you hesitate But oh well sit back relax Nd watch us dance to the max (Arjunas turntable freestyle scratch) Alright now Juna Its your time Stop. Now slow it down now now speed it back up. |
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Jun 22 2007, 06:44 PM
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 Pocketful of Sunshine Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already.
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Jun 22 2007, 06:46 PM
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 Realm of Fire Group: Member Posts: 229 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,934 |
haha good shit guys!
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Jun 22 2007, 06:50 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Ah, I love it! It's awesome. Great job!
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Jun 22 2007, 07:17 PM
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 just another girl Group: Member Posts: 490 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 393,136 |
its not my style of music, but i like it =) its great
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Jun 22 2007, 09:31 PM
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 Aye It's Me Mack Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 533,793 |
nice job u guys and to myself on dis lol my part is 30 seconds
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Jun 22 2007, 09:39 PM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Great job on the whole thing!
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Jun 22 2007, 09:47 PM
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 Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
QUOTE(tininja @ Jun 22 2007, 07:44 PM)  Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already.  I know, right?Ha ha, good job on the final edit, man. |
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Jun 22 2007, 11:52 PM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(Arjuna Capulong @ Jun 22 2007, 10:47 PM) I know, right?Ha ha, good job on the final edit, man. couldn't have done the final edit without you
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Jun 23 2007, 01:39 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
yeah
i listened to this shit like 209381023 times yall kept playing it over and over but it came out good congrats. |
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Jun 23 2007, 04:02 PM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 23 2007, 02:39 PM) yeah i listened to this shit like 209381023 times yall kept playing it over and over but it came out good congrats. You liked it. I'll be sure to put you on the next track |
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| *Mercy* |
Jun 23 2007, 04:21 PM
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i like it alot.
And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent. |
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Jun 23 2007, 07:28 PM
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 ALLISON Group: Official Designer Posts: 3,372 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 310,259 |
haha..great job
..nice lyrics 
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Jun 23 2007, 09:01 PM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(superfluous @ Jun 23 2007, 08:28 PM) haha..great job ..nice lyrics thanks =P QUOTE(Mercy @ Jun 23 2007, 05:21 PM) i like it alot. And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent. only juna,jerome,tina and mike heard it on vent. not everyone =P |
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Jun 25 2007, 09:29 AM
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Aye It's Me Mack Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 533,793 |
QUOTE(tininja @ Jun 22 2007, 07:44 PM) Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already. haha thanks glad u liked it even though u heard it about 100 times QUOTE(Mercy @ Jun 23 2007, 05:21 PM) i like it alot. And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent. glad u liked it |
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Jun 25 2007, 09:31 AM
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Aye It's Me Mack Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 533,793 |
QUOTE(superfluous @ Jun 23 2007, 08:28 PM) haha..great job ..nice lyrics thanks haha shyt double post shyttt srry wont happen again |
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| *steve330* |
Jun 25 2007, 09:44 AM
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^NO!
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Jun 25 2007, 09:58 AM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 10:39 AM) Can I give my honest opinion without any of you getting mad? Go ahead We'll learn/improve from what we do wrong in our next song. |
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Jun 25 2007, 10:14 AM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 11:04 AM) Check itttt What equipment did you use to make this song? The track is nice, and I like how everything recorded sounds clear. The singing and the "rapping" doesn't sound fuzzy or anything. Pretty professional production. There is a reason why I put rapping in quotes. Don't rap. Don't. The singing sounds really nice, but just don't rap. Especially with those lyrics. Those lyrics remind me of a pedophile pressuring a little girl to take her clothes off. Pushy, demanding, and out of place. You guys are kids right? Act like it. Be natural. Would you really say that to a girl you were trying to talk to IRL? Try being cute, sweet and charming--like Bow Wow or Romeo did when they were kid rappers. Rap about how you appreciate a girl, and you want to get to know her. Don't list what sexual actions you want to perform on her. Also what the girl is singing is kind of out of place with the whole message of the song. What IS the message of the song? Arjuna kiledddddddd it though (that's a good thing). Good job.  gawd I dont even know what wtf my sister make sup. Oh well. Message of the song is pretty much grinding with a girl and the girl is SUPPOSED to be a reply to what atrack and I said. But yeah know, shes 24. she pms' constantly and we just ler her sing what ever. As for the lyrics. Dont worry, our next song is more along the lines of cuteness and love. As for the production. We got our own studio down in mi casa. Our group is now called Flipset~ instead of br3aker4lyfe,jso,atrack etc etc. Currently in the making: Flipset - Can't Be Stopped. nice little sit back relax song for the summer ya know?
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Jun 25 2007, 12:05 PM
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 :) Group: Member Posts: 1,234 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 146,496 |
i love the lyrics
& the whole song is just good. nice job can't wait to hear the other songs.
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Jun 25 2007, 02:50 PM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 01:52 PM) Oh and you guys should get some ghostwriters oh? like neyo? lolo
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| *Moderator* |
Jun 25 2007, 02:58 PM
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Oh man, you guys are amazing. I love the music in the background and the singing. Looking forward to some more songs. Keep it coming guys. You rock!
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Jun 25 2007, 04:31 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
JUST HEARD IT FOR THE FIRST TIME. and LOL. cool..
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Jun 25 2007, 07:05 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
psh ghost writers. I'm the realest of em all. lol jk Like I said before PJ it's koo but it's missing that energy. You gotta really dig in dude the music can surely improve especially your guy's flow sounds like your trying to fit in words into the measures, lyrics can be improved as well. what i mean by the measures it's like me trying to play as many notes I can into a measure but the beat is off and I go over get what im saying?
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Jun 25 2007, 07:11 PM
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Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 25 2007, 08:05 PM) what i mean by the measures it's like me trying to play as many notes I can into a measure but the beat is off and I go over get what im saying? Ha ha, we all know I was working on that one. =P
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Jun 25 2007, 07:18 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
not you juna lol the "rappers"
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Jun 25 2007, 07:20 PM
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Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
Yeah, I was talking about that time I kept working on that slow part.
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Jun 25 2007, 08:00 PM
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(Arjunas turntable freestyle scratch)
Alright now Juna Its your time Stop. Now slow it down now now speed it back up. |
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Jun 26 2007, 09:14 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 3,291 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 503,024 |
I like it. So when the createblog album coming out?
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Jun 26 2007, 09:46 AM
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hai, Im Philjay Group: Member Posts: 922 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 520,964 |
QUOTE(designingskills @ Jun 26 2007, 10:14 AM) I like it. So when the createblog album coming out? Douno yet =P maybe end of the summer possibly. QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 25 2007, 08:05 PM) You gotta really dig in dude the music can surely improve especially your guy's flow sounds like your trying to fit in words into the measures Yeah there were at times where we had to fit words into measures =P No lie. We were like shyzzz, how can we fit this on.  Practice makes perfect though right? We got 2 songs coming up. We think they'll make up for the failness of Grind On The Floor. Can't Be Stopped and Officially Missing You 2007 Flipset~ |
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Jun 26 2007, 09:56 AM
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 *hugs and kisses* Group: Member Posts: 809 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 493,443 |
^
That was great!
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