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Moving on, poem
KayleighKins
post Jun 19 2007, 11:57 PM
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EVERY boy catches my eye
Looks me up and down
Smiles when they figure out
I was abandoned

Funny just to keep me sane
Giggling sex and pulsing heart
Worlds apart from where I'd thought I'd be
Just you and me
Hot chocolate

I was never good at math
Never could minus yesteryear
It was so easy for you
Your equations practical and lined in red

Your textbook end left me confused
Your lying lips left me soothed
Your handsome face overshadowed
All my doubts

Newer, longer, harder
Silent.

All the love in the world
Wasted.
 
WillTeddy
post Jun 25 2007, 09:55 AM
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Everyone out there doesn't know you

What people know is just skin deep

Oh but life is full of experience

So why leave your head down?

There is no such thing as a wasted love

Just a few unpleasant pictures

There alot of love that others need

So why not look around and care for a moment?

Because you are human

You are life

You can love

Beautiful


P.S. sorry i just felt like replying to your little poem with a little one of mine XD I liked it :) and I felt such a nice piece of writing deserves a half arsed attempt of a poetic reply XD
 
cherry90
post Jun 27 2007, 06:45 AM
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love
what a complicated word

i love you
three complicated words

the most used three words i know
yet they have such different meanings

to my girlfriend they are words of comfort
to my family it is infrequently said but mean alot

to my friends they mean that i will always be there
to my foe they have no meaning at all

where does the complications of love end??
when will the world collapse in on its self-hatred?

the answer?
when there is no true love left in the world!
xx





Ps. ur poem was very ncie and a gd reality check of how love is!

and i dnt fink mine comes close 2 as urs but its always nice 2 try and send a thing bk
 

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