Thorn the Snake, poetry bout a snake named thorn |
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 Jun 14 2004, 02:33 AM
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 ::destroy ure tv::  Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005  |
thorn the snake
once there was a snake who did nothing all day, so he decided to slither and move my way, this snake u see, is an old friend of mine, we chilled and hung out and went out to dine, god its been so very long, i've had to put up with this snake named 'thorn', "thorn?" u ask, "what a very strange name... i've never heard of a snake named that way," "thorn?" i say, "his name is so, coz he's a thorn in my side and he has to go!" so i try and try to get rid of the snake, but try as i might i cant escape, so till today him and me are mates, a friendship i am eager to eradicate, u might now wonder what the hell i'm after, ranting about this goddamn snake, u might want to ponder, maybe the snake i'm after, isnt a person or a place. dear thorn is in fact, a symbol of that, one characteristic i hate, one's called laziness, the other procrastination, 2 things i have to date. in times like this i get especially sick, of dear old slithery thorn, in times like this, when i have exams next week, i wish he'd never been born. Copyright © 2002 Reza Sallehuddin |
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Jun 14 2004, 03:03 AM
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Whoaa.. so the snake.. is actually something you made up? That you dislike about yourself? Very interesting. Nice rhymes.
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Jun 14 2004, 03:10 AM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
yea thorn's made up
 he's just symbolic. tend to use snakes when i wanna represent something evil though...not quite sure why  . thanx for reading it tho.
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Jun 14 2004, 05:38 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
why you gotta be bringin saneks down like that, yo? why you gotta be hatin the snakes. snakes are nice, man. unless they kill you. then they suck. but still! jeeze. poor snakes.
ok nevermid i like it |
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Jun 14 2004, 06:04 PM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
i'll be sure to write one about bunnies or sumthin next time dude. haha.
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Jun 14 2004, 06:47 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
no. man, you gotta ascociate DEER with evil and vice, man. no one knows, but deer are the worst animal ever! they come off as all cute and defenseledss, but they're actually more ravenous than 2000 great whites! kill all the deer!!!!!
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Jun 14 2004, 06:52 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
like this:
theres a deer i know he makes me smoke and drink and kill babies for satan i don't like the deer he's evil and stuff i wish he'd fall off somthing high onto somthing sharp but he's too busy sticking old women's hands into blenders sept rhyming. deers are the WORST! |
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Jun 15 2004, 12:11 AM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
u know that would sound real good with lots of power chords and sung with heaps of grunting.
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Jun 15 2004, 12:33 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
but, like, all my songs are like that. i think this oue should be acoustic. with a cowbell keeping beat. and sung like, like... yodeling. yea!
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Jun 15 2004, 01:02 AM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
it could even be a musical.
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Jun 15 2004, 08:15 PM
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Haha you two are funny.
 I like this poem, though - it made me laugh, actually.  Oh how I could get rid of Thorn, too. 
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Jun 16 2004, 02:06 AM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
well there's this other snake that i kinda hate,
a snake i didnt mention above, his name is bo and he likes to go following ppl he loves, he's a disgusting dude and he repels u, with the subtelty of a lawnmower, he's such a sore coz his name stands for the word body odour. once again, no deer. sorry dude. oh and hi kathleen. sigh. 
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Jun 16 2004, 06:01 AM
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Lol I so need to get rid of Thorn. But I'm too lazy to try and I keep procrastinating.
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