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 Apr 3 2007, 05:23 PM
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 stop staring >_>  Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389  |
LOL i finally FINISH it! it didnt take that long but i love it
x]  it's thumbed. click it XD |
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Apr 3 2007, 06:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 793 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 425,250 |
the shading on the keys needs to be better
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Apr 4 2007, 12:08 AM
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 s e c r e c y * Group: Member Posts: 471 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 417,181 |
It doesn't really need to be better...
I really like this! Simple, yet nice. I really like the brushes you used with this also, goes with the vector :] |
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Apr 4 2007, 12:37 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 793 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 425,250 |
I just mean so you can differentiate them a little better
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Apr 4 2007, 03:56 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
OMG I LVOE YOU AND YOUR AWESOME SKILLLLZZZZZ. Dude did you even do those flowers? or is that a brush, cuz if you did, MAD PROPS<3
anyways, I love it so much. LIEK I LOVE IT. |
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Apr 4 2007, 10:05 PM
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Hmm.. I dont like that the hair looks grey, I think if you had used a more brown-ish color it would look better.
But its definitely a very neat vexel, I like the background a lot, and the simplicity of it. 
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Apr 5 2007, 01:20 AM
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im new at this vector stuff but
it looks pretty decent |
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Apr 5 2007, 05:50 AM
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stop staring >_> Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
QUOTE(StanleyThePanda @ Apr 4 2007, 11:05 PM)  Hmm.. I dont like that the hair looks grey, I think if you had used a more brown-ish color it would look better. But its definitely a very neat vexel, I like the background a lot, and the simplicity of it. XD well sweetie my hair isnt really brown now is it XD QUOTE(phoenixpyre @ Apr 4 2007, 1:37 PM) I just mean so you can differentiate them a little better lol i know =) i seriously dont take these criticism to the heart XD |
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Apr 5 2007, 04:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
Beautiful work, I love the simplicity. The arm/shoulder area seems too simple though. Add some slight shadowing where the shoulder joint would be.
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Apr 5 2007, 04:33 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 793 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 425,250 |
if you don't take criticism then why bother posting? the whole point of criticism it to improve.
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Apr 5 2007, 04:55 PM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
I agree with Kara about the hair color. Even though your hair isn't brown, the grey just doesn't seem to really fit. But overall, it's really nice.
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Apr 5 2007, 07:30 PM
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 fragile. Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 503,750 |
I like the hair & the background & the flowers & the piano. Haha. Great work =]
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Apr 5 2007, 07:41 PM
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I also agree about the hair color, but it's nicely done. I'm trying to decide whether I like so much usage of brushes or not..
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Apr 5 2007, 10:30 PM
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stop staring >_> Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
QUOTE(phoenixpyre @ Apr 5 2007, 5:33 PM) if you don't take criticism then why bother posting? the whole point of criticism it to improve. when i said i dont take criticism to the heart, what i meant was that i dont get mad or upset or down or "oversensitive" over criticism >_> |
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Apr 7 2007, 09:16 PM
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 & my dreams fall down Group: Member Posts: 1,173 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 291,336 |
If their were less things in the background, it would look better. But the vector looks great, to me!
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Apr 8 2007, 12:41 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
the vector is really nice. I like how you express the detail only in the shadows. The background is a mess though. what's the significance of all those flowers and random shapes? Its really distracting. When i first look at the image, i picture a relatively simple background, maybe just one nice color with a little shading around the corners for volume.
Also your color scheme consists of pale colors contrasted by black. The blues dont fit. They ruin the mood. a veryy light grey matches better THe bg really takes away from your beautiful vector, so basically.. simplify it =) |
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