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Mar 22 2007, 08:47 PM
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![]() stop staring >_> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
Okay, i like to get advice and yea just look at it and tell me what to improove, because i hate to finish it then go back and fix it LOL, so i rather do it during the process
This is Jessica Alba (my role model) >D
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Mar 22 2007, 08:49 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
That's pretty good! I love the smooth style. The only thing that sticks out to me is the highlight on the right cheek. The top layer it too light.
Other than that it looks great so far. |
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Mar 22 2007, 09:05 PM
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![]() stop staring >_> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
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| *mona lisa* |
Mar 22 2007, 09:44 PM
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That's a great start. Not great, it's freaking awesome. But I think the left and right sides of her face clash in terms of color. But of course, it isn't finished yet so do your thing. :)
If you're having trouble with choosing colors, try desaturating it temporarily to see if there is a huge difference in tone. |
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Mar 22 2007, 09:50 PM
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![]() stop staring >_> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
That's a great start. Not great, it's freaking awesome. But I think the left and right sides of her face clash in terms of color. But of course, it isn't finished yet so do your thing. :) If you're having trouble with choosing colors, try desaturating it temporarily to see if there is a huge difference in tone. yea i noticed that too but like. the left side of her face have like a bright ass light, then the right side is like soo dim it's like a shadow kinda. im not gonna leave it as that color though once im finish, i think imma mystify the color once im done with the vector. >_< im feelin the laziness running through me again lol |
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Mar 23 2007, 04:26 PM
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![]() talent on another level ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
Lookin good so far, I hope to be as good as you one day.
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Mar 23 2007, 05:39 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
Looks good to me.
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Mar 24 2007, 10:41 AM
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mood: content ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
beautiful, smooth shapes
can't wait for you to finish |
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Mar 24 2007, 04:02 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
Like how it's smooth and the eyes are awesomeeeee, keep going.
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Mar 24 2007, 06:07 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
The eye looks great! Please don't leave the eyebrow as one shape though, add some texture to it.
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Mar 24 2007, 06:09 PM
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Yes, like Jackie said, Change the eyebrow some, add little hairs and such.
But man.. The eye looks great (esp. the eyeshadow), and I really like the skin. It looks great so far. |
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Mar 25 2007, 11:54 AM
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Just another kid... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 600 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 505,690 |
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Mar 25 2007, 02:32 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 3,459 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 328,021 |
Wow, this looks really really really good so far, the only thing I have a problem with is the eyebrow.. don't forget, eyebrows aren't a block of color. Also, the highlights on the cheek and nose are a little too bright - it makes her look like plastic!
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Mar 25 2007, 03:18 PM
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![]() stop staring >_> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
Lol yea the eyebrow, i usually do it like that first for the base then add little piece of hair over it x]
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