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 Mar 4 2007, 03:26 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex!  Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600  |
Ugh, I misspelled "twilight" in the topic title.
 Another short poem: Twilight Falls It was pouring emotion on a twilight of false insanity with glass lust painted on the abyss for a sky. Engulfed, the shadow of black autumn knelt for ungiven defeat. |
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Mar 16 2007, 06:42 AM
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I like it=]
but i think it needs alittle more detail, and lines. but overall i like it. well done. |
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