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 Feb 27 2007, 05:35 PM
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The light shining on me
Not stoping as we speak Its never going to be gone Loudness and high Pitchey would never describe it It expresses emotion People stop and liste They wonder where it is comming from Its my voice Singing the truth about how I am Its bright and colorful Just like the world around us While musical instruments play My heart beats to the music Dancing and being happy People joining with me to express The shadows go away and all the pain It all dissapears Freedom Happiness Comfort ITS THE END OF MY DARKNESS |
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Feb 27 2007, 06:28 PM
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Nice. Good job. It needs a little touch up on typos but it is nice.
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Feb 27 2007, 07:07 PM
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better than the other one
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Feb 27 2007, 07:13 PM
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lol well today was a good day....:]
idk for some reason i felt like so happy....weird....lol and i know i can't spell for my life LMFAO |
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Feb 27 2007, 07:15 PM
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QUOTE(*.brokendoll.* @ Feb 27 2007, 7:13 PM)  lol well today was a good day....:] idk for some reason i felt like so happy....weird....lol and i know i can't spell for my life LMFAO Well that's good, learn to love life... :] |
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Feb 27 2007, 08:08 PM
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[LetYourEmotionsShowInYourWorkOfLife] Group: Member Posts: 41 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,204 |
yes it is...but yet the obstacles suck...lol jk jk
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Mar 1 2007, 02:30 PM
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QUOTE yes it is...but yet the obstacles suck...lol jk jk <3 I still am looking for the guide book to life 
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