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Where the Sidewalk Ends
Fabio.
post Feb 18 2007, 07:46 PM
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Wow, I'm actually scared to post this because I don't know most of you. ermm.gif

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49092554/

I actually don't do manips as much as I used to, but when I do, they usually have significance. This one was a dream and my favorite poem of all time.
 
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post Feb 18 2007, 08:03 PM
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Meli! I know you! biggrin.gif Long time No see, Dear.

The manip is beautiful, I don't really like the Seagull. But everything else is lovely. thumbsup.gif Welcome back to CB.
 
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post Feb 18 2007, 08:09 PM
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!!! I KNOW YOU TOO!! *hugs*

It's not a-- okay, well, I guess it is a seagull. BUT IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO BE! It's supposed to be, uh...

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And there the moon-bird rests from his flight


One of those. cry.gif
 
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post Feb 18 2007, 08:23 PM
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MEELLLIII!

you're back!!! (its michelle. name change n'all)

i really like it, although the moon looks out of place, and the blending in the sky could be better. Also, i think the lighting on the girl is a little off.

i'm so glad you're back!
 
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post Feb 18 2007, 08:30 PM
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QUOTE(Fabio. @ Feb 18 2007, 8:09 PM) *
!!! I KNOW YOU TOO!! *hugs*

It's not a-- okay, well, I guess it is a seagull. BUT IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO BE! It's supposed to be, uh...
One of those. cry.gif

Erk, after I wrote what I said, I was like "Dang, its probably a part of the poem. And I'm going to feel dumb".
Since it is a part of the poem, I like it. Everything is perfect. happy.gif
 
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post Feb 18 2007, 11:32 PM
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Oh my god it's beautiful worthy.gif
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 01:16 AM
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Wow.. that is so cool. blink.gif
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post Feb 19 2007, 01:24 AM
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Why the fear? Anyone who sees this will think it's beautiful, whether they know you or not. hug.gif It looks gorgeous, I love the shift in color of the sky, too.
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 01:25 AM
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It really does remind me of the picture on Shel Silverstein's book of poems, Where the Sidewalk Ends. '

Great Job!
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 06:08 AM
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Simply beautiful is all I can say.
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 08:04 AM
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MELI THIS IS AMAZING, its soooooooo amazing.
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 05:18 PM
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Ahhh. It's gorgeous. I.. can't.. stop staring...
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 06:18 PM
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QUOTE(Fabio. @ Feb 18 2007, 7:46 PM) *
Wow, I'm actually scared to post this because I don't know most of you. ermm.gif


Why would that scare you?

GORGEOUS The colors, the girl, the cliff, the blending, the placement = <3

But the placement of the "moon bird" seems.. a little off..
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 06:20 PM
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Welcome back, I love it!
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 08:06 PM
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it's very good.
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 08:15 PM
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QUOTE(mocassinsx29 @ Feb 19 2007, 5:18 PM) *
But the placement of the "moon bird" seems.. a little off...


Okay, so the moon bird needs to go. LOL. I wish I would have saved the .psd. I usually do, I had just stopped because of hard drive space issues (which is now irrelevant because I got a 250G external...). So the bird stays.

Wow, thanks for the good feedback. whistling.gif
 
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post Feb 19 2007, 09:42 PM
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omg totally love ur sig
ok as for the manip i agree with the bird and the moon... seems a bit off, but the colors used and the clouds look lovely
same with the model and the whole theme of this manip is awesome
Great image
 
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post Feb 20 2007, 12:47 PM
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dude! its fantabulous! woww..i love it.. haha dont be scared. lol its so awesome how we can use photoshop to illustrate what we dreamt.. =)
 
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post Feb 20 2007, 12:51 PM
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Wow, truly beautiful! I love the coloring of the clouds/sky. The position of the bird does seem off/random. Perhaps it would've been better making the bird fly off in the distance showing that it can go to greater lengths than the girl due to the end of the sidewalk, er, cliff. XD

And if you were going for the realistic look, the moon is a tad too big.
 
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post Feb 21 2007, 09:24 AM
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its like.. its night & day at the same time! lol
The moon is distracting. The middle is very bright, so it catches our attention, then there is a big white circle that also attracts our attention. Is there any way you can reduce the opacity of it? put a cloud over it, or move it?

The colors of this are amazing. Shel Silverstein is amazing <3 Ilove her poems
 

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